Awake

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The rope Is not the snake My child Awake! When we tell lies Our heart aches My child Awake! It is better to give Than to take My child Awake! Love glows in our heart Gods dwelling place My child Awake! 07-March-2021

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Alexis Y.

Date: 3/8/2021 8:46:00 PM

Wow! Seeker, You have penned an outstanding children’s poem. Good life lessons as well. Excellent job. Have a great evening:-) Alexis

Unseeking Seeker
Date: 3/8/2021 9:18:00 PM

Thank you, Alexis!

Gershon Wolf

Date: 3/8/2021 8:00:00 PM

Wow. This is superb, classic children's poetry, Seeker. And you know what? -- There's a nursery rhyme contest going right now on the Soup. It's sponsored by Eve Roper. I think that this would be a really great entry. Perhaps you'll look into entering that contest... Hope and Happiness, Gershon

Unseeking Seeker
Date: 3/8/2021 8:30:00 PM

Perhaps this would be out of sync for the contest, not delivering the ‘playful’ touch! Thanks for your encouragement and visit Gershon! :)

Panagiota Romios

Date: 3/8/2021 7:52:00 AM

A lovely write.. * Panagiota*

Unseeking Seeker
Date: 3/8/2021 8:30:00 AM

Actually I wrote it as a nursery rhyme to address small children on matters which befuddles us adults!