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Awake

AWAKE!

Forebear I beg if I am found obtuse
Not turning from the indigent I see
Should I aver egregious a view
They be ascribed a sloth delirium

My comments here may seem not delicate
Yet if I choose travail  to consecrate
Would you in intercession mediate
Bring those in need restored awakening

Copyright © | Year Posted 2019




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Date: 9/9/2019 5:11:00 PM
aha, how succinct you were with those words .If these words were in that one contest almost closing, I just know I threw my hands up and decided not to try!!
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Geoffrey Brewer
Date: 9/9/2019 8:04:00 PM
A tricky one with traps I’m not sure I avoided. Thanks for the feedback, Andrea.

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