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Awaiting Visual

awaiting visual color bursts across the night red and gold glorious For the Fireworks contest in the Haiku form. Written for Deborha Guzzi

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Lisa Cole

Date: 7/5/2010 7:50:00 AM

i really like this doris xx

Debbie Guzzi

Date: 7/2/2010 12:25:00 PM

You have soup mail my friend!

Stacey Watts

Date: 7/1/2010 7:17:00 AM

You describe this perfectly. Very well executed here. Thank you for your warm welcome as well.

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 7/1/2010 4:10:00 AM

A wonderful entry in the contest. Good luck, Doris

Sara Kendrick

Date: 7/1/2010 4:06:00 AM

Reads like a winner for it describes the actions and energy of the firework show...Good luck with this great one....Mom

Lisa Cole

Date: 7/1/2010 3:51:00 AM

very nice

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 6/30/2010 9:18:00 PM

My boyfriend, Ron, has a business partner who has a private jet who flew us down (16 hours) and will take us home .. but I wanna stay.. so I am thinking of planting myself in one of these mosaic flower pots ..or terrariums.. and not be found....I was antsy coming down but now I have my new phone and laptops to play with and photos to look at so hopefully it won't be a long flight back.. if they find me to take home.haha..

Caroline Cécile Delacroix

Date: 6/30/2010 9:18:00 PM

LOL! Very nice! Sounds gorgeous. Great Haiku, Doris. Thanks for sharing. Caroline.

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 6/30/2010 8:59:00 PM

This sizzles!! Luv, Andrea

Wilma Neels

Date: 6/30/2010 8:56:00 PM

Awesome Doris, best wishes with the contest, luv Wilma

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 6/30/2010 8:52:00 PM

Yes .. I feel it.. I hear it .. the sound effects make the Haiku Doris.. good luck.. a winner for sure.. with luv from the "Sweetheart" in Hawaii.. ..good luck.. to ya...