Awaiting the Bridegroom

The house has been cleaned, 
the hearts have been washed. 
With oil, the lamps are replete; 
all await with bated breath, 
the bridegroom to greet.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2016

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Buhain-Baello Avatar
March 26, 2016 at 5:27 AM
Very nice and profound, concise but full of meaning. ~~~~Cynthia
Srivastava Avatar
March 26, 2016 at 7:47 AM
Very encouraging; thanks.
Daniel Avatar
March 26, 2016 at 3:52 AM
Great write..:)
Srivastava Avatar
March 26, 2016 at 4:38 AM
Thanks!
A  Avatar
March 26, 2016 at 2:57 AM
Alok Srivastava, this is a great read. SKAT
Srivastava Avatar
March 26, 2016 at 4:39 AM
Thanks!
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