Awaiting the Big Bang

From the beginning of time, are we mapped This journey that we're on us from the trees Just where does it all end are we sapped Whom has won or lost as centuries please Is it what we dream that's eventually true What becomes as our evolution thralls Dreaming helicopters flying through the blue As we progress with life, our continues fall Just where are we from, this we all of us Are we destined from the beginning of time Caught amidst the explosion Big Bang bus Will there be a day when we eventually find <*>
Copyright © | Year Posted 2015


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Date: 12/1/2015 5:54:00 PM
huge one, deep and intriguing however the message is there in between the lines.. =`) this the kind of poetry that i like you doing,, =`)~Olive Eloisa =`)
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James Fraser
Date: 12/8/2015 11:49:00 AM
Hey little one, glad you liked this one. As I mentioned below on another comment, sometimes I write as deep as the 'Mariana Trench' ~~ hugs forever ~~ your James xx
Date: 11/30/2015 11:04:00 AM
James, Enjoyed reading.... LUV **SKAT**
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James Fraser
Date: 12/8/2015 11:42:00 AM
Thank you SKAT, smiles ~~ James ~~
Date: 11/29/2015 4:02:00 PM
Much to ponder James. I don't think we will ever truly know.
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James Fraser
Date: 12/8/2015 11:36:00 AM
Your right Tim, I doubt we ever will ~ James ~
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