Awaiting

Falls trees turning leaves
Blanket the bare autum ground
Skies of grayish mist
A prelude of snowey days
We awate the menthol spring...

Tanka,sorta...
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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Mehta Avatar
August 14, 2010 at 4:37 AM
Thoughts well expressed and aptly penned, gary
Sweetheart Avatar
August 13, 2010 at 10:44 PM
Great imagery Gary.. beautiful words and lines.. enjoyed your Tanka tonight..happy weekend..with luv..
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August 13, 2010 at 6:20 PM
WELL IT SORTS IS GOOD, BUT VERY AWESOME. LOVED THE CHANGE*LV~SKAT
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