Avoiding the Path To Sadness

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How to avoid dwelling on the path that leads to sadness.

Avoiding the path to sadness

See the path
that never ends...

familiar ways 
just like a friend

winding slowly through
ancient memories...

pausing briefly
to disturb my ease

and inner peace...

that was dwelling 
in my mind...

takes it's time

walking the path...

to sadness

All my past troubles
they appear...

kill my hope
fill me with fear

Never ending
feelings of despair...

my pleasant dreams
they vanish in the air

and my illusions...

were supplanted by
dark night...

shading my light...

spurring me on...

the path to sadness

And through my haze
I came to see...

God's love was waiting
there for me

He reached out
to me and took 
my hand...

helped me face
my fears 
and understand...

that all my sorrows...

will all vanish
with my faith...

love conquers pain...

un-paves  the path
to sadness.

Now I walk
a path of light...

without darkness
without fright

knowing that 
my God is there for me

vanquishing my cares
anxieties

and my life...

has been blessed 
with Godly hope...

that helps me cope

Avoid the pain 
upon the path...
to sadness.


John Derek Hamilton
September 12,2016

Copyright © | Year Posted 2016



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Date: 9/24/2016 8:17:00 AM
Loved this one absolutely, John:) could relate very well:)
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John Hamilton
Date: 9/24/2016 12:49:00 PM
Thanks Jo
Date: 9/15/2016 12:45:00 AM
A wonderful declaration of faith John.
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Date: 9/15/2016 8:48:00 AM
Thanks Richard, it kind of took a turn, I started writing something else, and this came out. Kind of interesting how the process works sometimes.
Date: 9/12/2016 4:39:00 PM
Your faith shines brightly in this poem, John. I enjoyed the read:)
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Date: 9/12/2016 10:15:00 PM
Thanks Daniel, appreciate the read and the support, you are kind!
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