Avoiding Cruel Task By Candlelight - Dh

AVOIDING CRUEL TASK BY CANDLELIGHT - DH

her shadow quivers.
(the hemisphere of
a potted plant cool -
a divisive mind.)
she stands in the soil.

she cannot move
for she’s been caught.
her breath catches,
her fingers wrought.

cucumber
at her desk
burns in hell -

pinches
the flame

stark

1/18/2019
Diminished Hexaverse
Sponsor - Charles Messina

*American saying: cool as a cucumber can mean calm but also cold
**stark - rigid as in death, harsh, blunt, strong, absolute
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Dietrich Avatar
January 27, 2019 at 3:19 PM
Congrats on your win, Kim. Unique imagery!
Rodrigues Avatar
January 27, 2019 at 7:46 PM
Thank you, Andrea! xx
Messina Avatar
January 27, 2019 at 8:58 AM
Great take on the contest with this wonderful poem, Kim! Congratulations on your 2nd place win. Charlie :)
Rodrigues Avatar
January 27, 2019 at 7:46 PM
Thank you, Charlie <3 Kim
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