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Aviated Parachute

A short poetry of Parascending by Mrs.Madhavi

                                                Aviated parachute

 Parachute parachute you flying so high.
 Like an eagle you swing in the sky.
 Flourishingly Waving in an air.
 Your skill astonished me, Take me away !

 A play of lustrous rainbow colour.
 Cascaded by a Blushing rain.
 Sensing the rhythm, flower‘s crimsoned.
 Making me feel excited, Take me away !

 Inspiring me as you without wings swiftly aviate.
 Fortunately you have a flying glance at this amazed beauty of the earth.
 Give me one chance some another day.
 Move me away, Take me away !

 People will greet me, when myself Joe will be lime lighting in the sky.
 Viewing the artistic magnifying creativity, beautified by arduous earthborn 
 mortalizing persona‘s.
 my itchy feet, move me away, Take me away !

 screaking high, conveying regards to almighty and pray for celestial peace.
 Ohhh my spice jet please take me high.
 For the god‘s sake make me fly.
 Take me away or else I will die !

 By,
 Madhavi

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Skat A Date: 10/23/2013 8:53:00 PM Madhavi, , interesting Personifying Science poem.... congrats on the win..... Love Skat <3 Login to Reply Maddy Sp Date: 10/26/2013 12:20:00 PM Thanks a ton Skat. :) ##Mads

Poet Destroyer A Date: 10/22/2013 10:43:00 PM such an awesome win. CONGRATULATIONS... always & forever~ LINDA Login to Reply Maddy Sp Date: 10/26/2013 12:21:00 PM Thanks P.D.,Hug you babes.. :) ^\/^mads

Dr.Ram Mehta Date: 10/18/2013 5:22:00 AM Congrats on the win in the contest, Madhavi Login to Reply Maddy Sp Date: 10/26/2013 12:21:00 PM Thanks Dr.Ram. *****MADS*****

Sheri Fresonke Harper Date: 10/17/2013 10:41:00 PM Madhavi, thanks so much for this wonderful , very hopeful poem. I very much enjoyed it. Unfortunately, you did not select the personification form. You do personify and it could be seen as science bringing us higher but I think it needs one more edit to make it personifying science and perhaps it's best seen as the poem it is rather than changing it. Very enjoyable read. Thanks much for entering my contest. Login to Reply Maddy Sp Date: 10/26/2013 12:23:00 PM Hi Sheri, Will catch you in some of your other contest. Also thanks for encouraging and appreciating my work.. ##madhavi