Aviary

sky above empty
holding breath no air to breathe
canary is dead
Copyright © | Year Posted 2017

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Rodrigues Avatar
February 16, 2017 at 6:16 AM
Sad one. My neighborhood is teeming with all sorts of birds and wildlife! It makes me happy to see so much life!
Sietesantos Avatar
February 14, 2017 at 7:59 AM
Sad but excellent haiku! Well done and a 7! Hugs. Pandita
Pigeon Tart Avatar
February 14, 2017 at 12:56 PM
Thank you Pandita. As a bird lover, seeing numbers decline year after year is absolutely breaking my heart. xomo!
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