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Aviary

sky above empty holding breath no air to breathe canary is dead

Copyright © | Year Posted 2017




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Date: 2/16/2017 6:16:00 AM
Sad one. My neighborhood is teeming with all sorts of birds and wildlife! It makes me happy to see so much life!
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Date: 2/14/2017 7:59:00 AM
Sad but excellent haiku! Well done and a 7! Hugs. Pandita
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Maureen McGreavy The Insolent Rib
Date: 2/14/2017 12:56:00 PM
Thank you Pandita. As a bird lover, seeing numbers decline year after year is absolutely breaking my heart. xomo!

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