Mick Talbot Poet Concrete

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A         A
A    V     V     A
A    V   A  A    V    A
A   V   A   T T   A   V   A
A   V   A  T  AA  T  A   V   A
A   V   A   T A R A T   A   V   A
A  V   A   T  A RR A  T   A   V  A
A   V   A   T  A  RR  A  T   A   V   A
A   V   A   T   A  RR  A   T   A   V   A
A   V   A   T   A   RR   A   T   A   V   A
A    V   A   T   A   RR    A   T   A   V   A
A   V   A   T   A   R    R   A   T   A   V   A
my avatar I've crowned I think its pretty
cool              s o            cool
yes
I've given
it a nose

now a mouth
I           I
suppose

should call it a day
but a beard will be
fine a black one
not white like
m i n e
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7th December 2017
Entered in the 'Avatar Competition'
Sponsored by Line Gauthier

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Eve Roper December 16, 2017 at 5:50 PM Very creative, Mick, congratulations on your win! Hugs Eve~`* Mick Talbot December 17, 2017 at 3:29 AM Thanks Eve, my highest position yet, mind you I'd be well satisfied with a mention. Take care now, best forever wishes Mick!

Gregory Richard Barden December 16, 2017 at 6:02 AM Extraordinary shape, Mick, you are so accomplished at this, and a wonderful verse as well. Congrats on your win. :-) Mick Talbot December 16, 2017 at 5:20 PM Many thanks Gregory, your comment very much appreciated!

Line Gauthier December 15, 2017 at 11:32 PM Very original, Mick. Congrats on your win. Mick Talbot December 16, 2017 at 4:53 AM O what a pleasant surprise, an early Xmas present, many thanks Line! Best forever wishes, Mick

Akkina Downing December 6, 2017 at 4:23 PM How creative is this. Nicely done Mick and best of luck in the contest... hugs and smiles :) Mick Talbot December 6, 2017 at 6:40 PM Thanks Akkina, had fun doing it, and Line did say 'whimsical' lol :)