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If I were that girl in the photograph
They glared, they stared you had to be there 
A room filled with eyes
Was not a surprise 
Talk of the town but look how time flies
Copyright © | Year Posted 2015

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Dietrich Avatar
April 28, 2015 at 4:25 PM
this is an interesting poem. It almost reads like a limerick! Love your title for it!
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April 28, 2015 at 4:24 PM
hey, thanks so much for the nice wins for everybody. I've been getting such low scores this week, It really made my day!
Kendrick Avatar
April 28, 2015 at 3:12 PM
Interesting work..Enjoyed reading this one today..Thanks for the honor of placing in your contest..Sara
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