Avalanche of Emptiness

AVALANCHE OF EMPTINESS When wily death rang the bell, you swiftly slipped in it Never did you think for a while that how will I stay alone? Deep in my heart, an avalanche of emptiness has hit It’s unfair of you to leave me alone mid-way of our life To let me suffer in silence drenched in sea of grief Hadn’t you promised togetherness in happiness and also strife? How could you bury that vow of togetherness? Aren’t you very mean? Why did you add this new squalid rule in our game of hide and seek…. That you hide forever, I fail to seek to stay as your widowed queen My mind has gone blank, I see everything now only in black and white Flowing tears have dried my soul cleaving in it a lifeless tunnel Your memories like thorns prick my loneliness each day and night The darkness of your loss is absolute, not just like an empty dream… To which I could fix a ray of false hope and try my best to survive You have left my life distraught peeling away every trace of cream My vacant life has gained an expertise to manifest intense pain The ‘me’ in myself is dead as a door nail when ‘you’ in ‘us’ is robbed To fill this void by anyone else will always go in shattered vain!
22nd October 2016 For Contest- Words-Drowned-In-Tears Poetry Sponsored by- Broken Wings

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Date: 10/25/2016 6:53:00 PM
AN congratulations on your win in my contest with this well penned poem
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Anu Nayak
Date: 10/26/2016 1:12:00 PM
Dear B.W, thank you very much and glad you liked my poem....//love.Anu:)
Date: 10/24/2016 1:44:00 AM
Beautiful words and wonderfully written, the meaning of the contest captured exactly. Congratulations!
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Anu Nayak
Date: 10/24/2016 1:51:00 PM
Dear Darren, thank you for your lovely comment and for your sweet wishes, glad you liked my write//love, Anu:)
Date: 10/23/2016 7:39:00 PM
Anulaxmi, a very well written poem. Congratulations on your win....Hugs eve
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Anu Nayak
Date: 10/24/2016 12:14:00 AM
Dear Eve, thank you so much ! this contest has brought tears in many eyes...well....thanks again ...glad you liked my poem...//love, Anu:)
Date: 10/23/2016 2:35:00 PM
Wow I'd say you captured the meaning of drowning in tears. I loved the bit about adding a rule to hide n go seek. It's a poetic punch in the gut and beautifully done
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Anu Nayak
Date: 10/24/2016 12:12:00 AM
Dear Phillip, thank you so much for your pleasant visit ... this contest has brought tears in many eyes...well....thanks again ...glad you liked my poem...//love, Anu:)
Date: 10/22/2016 7:08:00 AM
A profound poem of shock and hurt .... powerful expression ... GL ...
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Anu Nayak
Date: 10/22/2016 7:19:00 AM
Dear Probir, thank you, your visit and words much appreciated :)// love, Anu:)
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