Joseph May Poet Tritina

Autumn's Song

September's song is summer's sigh
Its rhythm rides toward an equinox
Leaves will soon be ready for their aerial ballet

Like a snowflake's swirl, a butterfly's ballet
Autumn's colourful leaves and windy sigh
Bring night and day into equinox

Springtime also enjoys its own equinox
As blooms swirl in a breezy ballet
Nature releases a joyful sigh

Seasons sigh at equinox, each with its own ballet

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Deb M September 14, 2026 at 1:35 PM What a lovely poem Joseph...graceful and light! Debx

Hiya Sharma September 14, 2026 at 6:29 AM Awwwn the aerial ballet of leaves!!! Goshhh! This one is so sweet and beautiful and elegant dear Joseph! I love the imagery of butterflies doing ballet and the swirling snowflakes! Such a flowy and beautiful tritina! Adore the choice of words here and also it's very brilliant how you've crafted every line.. everything is so vivid and alive! 🍁🍂💫🌙 Pleasure reading your words today, sending poetic warmth and fairy starsz 🧚 🧚 ⭐ ✨

Heidi Sands September 11, 2026 at 11:48 AM True expression of the change and joy of the seasons :)

Daniel Henry Rodgers September 11, 2026 at 10:45 AM Hello Joseph, As I read I thought, such structural elegance and thematic grace. What makes your piece work so well is that the formal constraint never feels like a cage, instead, it mirrors the exact cyclical, repeating dance of the seasons themselves. It is fluid, beautifully balanced, and deeply evocative of the changing year. Amen! Blessings, Daniel