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Autumn's Renew

strong gusting winds swirl
leaves like kites with jet packs fly

fighting their demise
enjoying life now
freedom to soar high and far

tomorrow's compost

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Norberto Franco Cisneros

September 3, 2010 at 12:50 PM

a mind that is working - super

Sara Kendrick

September 3, 2010 at 7:46 AM

I thought that I read and commented on this one..I guess that I did not comment, huh,.. Confusion with pain meds..Great write the comparison great..It was my grandmother Stephens who sent me back to rear you three little mischievous hoddlums...Mom

Lindsay Kelly

September 2, 2010 at 1:38 PM

Really enjoyed this. Captured it perfectly!

Tahera Mannan

August 31, 2010 at 10:34 PM

Very very well described. Loved the end. Thanks for the comments.

Connie Marcum Wong

August 31, 2010 at 12:46 PM

An excellent Choka Doris. For me, autumn is one of the most beautiful seasons. Loved your ending too. Aloha, Connie

Ravindra K Kapoor

August 31, 2010 at 11:57 AM

Very sweetly written lines telling lot more about the ultimate fate of leaves. Great write my friend. Sorry in the last 7-8 days I was away from internet. Thank you so much for your good wishes on my Poem Just keep always your Hopes alive. Love and best wishes always.....Ravindra........Doris Culverhouse.

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

August 31, 2010 at 9:14 AM

Doris u do know the contest is for Haiku .. this Choka is great.. I wrote a Choka a few months ago for a contest and had lots of fun with it.. glad u enjoyed the photos and my new poetry..luv..

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