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Autumn's Renew

strong gusting winds swirl leaves like kites with jet packs fly fighting their demise enjoying life now freedom to soar high and far tomorrow's compost

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010




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Date: 9/3/2010 12:50:00 PM
a mind that is working - super
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Date: 9/3/2010 7:46:00 AM
I thought that I read and commented on this one..I guess that I did not comment, huh,.. Confusion with pain meds..Great write the comparison great..It was my grandmother Stephens who sent me back to rear you three little mischievous hoddlums...Mom
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Date: 9/2/2010 1:38:00 PM
Really enjoyed this. Captured it perfectly!
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Date: 8/31/2010 10:34:00 PM
Very very well described. Loved the end. Thanks for the comments.
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Date: 8/31/2010 12:46:00 PM
An excellent Choka Doris. For me, autumn is one of the most beautiful seasons. Loved your ending too. Aloha, Connie
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Date: 8/31/2010 11:57:00 AM
Very sweetly written lines telling lot more about the ultimate fate of leaves. Great write my friend. Sorry in the last 7-8 days I was away from internet. Thank you so much for your good wishes on my Poem Just keep always your Hopes alive. Love and best wishes always.....Ravindra........Doris Culverhouse.
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Date: 8/31/2010 9:14:00 AM
Doris u do know the contest is for Haiku .. this Choka is great.. I wrote a Choka a few months ago for a contest and had lots of fun with it.. glad u enjoyed the photos and my new poetry..luv..
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