Autumn's Proud Treetops

Autumn's proud treetops
the leaves once so beautiful
are now crumbling
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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Brown Avatar
June 21, 2010 at 6:30 AM
Congratulations on your win in Linda-Marie's contest "Seasons Senryu" Peter. Love, Carol
Cwiak Avatar
June 20, 2010 at 9:53 PM
Nicely done and a well deserved HM in the contest. Congrats! Dan C
Dietrich Avatar
June 19, 2010 at 5:20 PM
VERY NICE. Congratulations on making it into the winners circle, Peter. LUv, andrea
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June 19, 2010 at 1:49 PM
Nice use of imagery for a creative view. Congratulations on being one of the winners in Linda-Marie's contest. Enjoy your honor. I wish you many more. Karen
Sweetheart Avatar
June 16, 2010 at 9:17 PM
Congrats Peter on your HM in my contest with this wonderful entry.. also appreciate your support of my contest.. with luv from the "Sweetheart"
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June 16, 2010 at 4:20 PM
I like the title. You captured the season quite nicely. Thank you for sharing your poem with us. Karen
Gorelick Avatar
June 15, 2010 at 9:12 PM
Nice one Peter..I love this short form..you paint a nice picture.BG
Conway Avatar
June 15, 2010 at 7:48 PM
Very nice Senryu!~Tirzah~
Mehta Avatar
June 15, 2010 at 7:40 PM
A very impressive Senryu. Good luck in the contest.
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