Autumns Lovely Bed

Red
Yellow
Orange brown
Trees welcome fall
Lovely color glows
Vivid against blue sky
Frosty bright mornings sigh
Smells of Autumn grows
Falling leaves call
Earthen down
Mellow
Bed

The Beauty of Fall, Merse form
2nd place

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9-7-2021
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Ashley Avatar
October 24, 2021 at 8:30 PM
Dear Jeanne, congratulations for your wonderful win in Mala's contest with your beautiful Fall poem. Warmest wishes.. ~Susan
Roper Avatar
September 26, 2021 at 11:06 AM
Great cool brisk feeling and imagery , Jeanne , congratulations on your win in Malabika's contest! Hugs Eve
Mcgee Avatar
September 26, 2021 at 7:04 PM
gracias Eve. What a fun contest with beautiful entries.
Ray Choudhury Avatar
September 26, 2021 at 6:15 AM
Congratulations on your win. Beautiful Merse - enjoyed ~ Mala
Mcgee Avatar
September 26, 2021 at 7:03 PM
Thank you Mala. Thank you for the placement and for the challenge.
Scragg Avatar
September 8, 2021 at 12:29 PM
Beautiful! A lovely contender for the contest.
Mcgee Avatar
September 8, 2021 at 8:24 PM
Thank you Natasha!
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