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Autumns Lovely Bed

Red
Yellow
Orange brown
Trees welcome fall
Lovely color glows
Vivid against blue sky
Frosty bright mornings sigh
Smells of Autumn grows
Falling leaves call
Earthen down
Mellow
Bed

The Beauty of Fall, Merse form
2nd place

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9-7-2021

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Date: 10/24/2021 8:30:00 PM
Dear Jeanne, congratulations for your wonderful win in Mala's contest with your beautiful Fall poem. Warmest wishes.. ~Susan
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Date: 9/26/2021 11:06:00 AM
Great cool brisk feeling and imagery , Jeanne , congratulations on your win in Malabika's contest! Hugs Eve
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Jeanne Mcgee
Date: 9/26/2021 7:04:00 PM
gracias Eve. What a fun contest with beautiful entries.
Date: 9/26/2021 6:15:00 AM
Congratulations on your win. Beautiful Merse - enjoyed ~ Mala
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Jeanne Mcgee
Date: 9/26/2021 7:03:00 PM
Thank you Mala. Thank you for the placement and for the challenge.
Date: 9/8/2021 12:29:00 PM
Beautiful! A lovely contender for the contest.
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Jeanne Mcgee
Date: 9/8/2021 8:24:00 PM
Thank you Natasha!

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