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Autumn's Kiss

silver fog blanket shivers to embrace sunshine gliding with the wind ~~~~~~ golden hues tiptoe spread gossamer veil of light over asleep snow ~~~~~~ glistening snow melts, drizzle adorns yellow leaves-- autumn's adieu kiss June 3, 2020 Fresh Traditional HAIKU (5-7-5) Poetry Contest Sponsor: JCB Burl ~Winner: 1st Place Best Haiku Ever Old or New Poetry Contest Sponsor: Chantelle Anne Cooke ~Premiere Contest Winner: 6th Place BRIAN'S SELECT 5,any form,any theme Poetry Contest Sponsor: Brian Strand ~Winner: Honorable Mention

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Connie Marcum Wong

Date: 6/20/2020 6:30:00 AM

I admire the more traditional Japanese haiku that is usually about a season and nature like the master haiku poets write Aditi, so your entry was very pleasing. These are beautiful! Congratulations on your deserving win my friend! Blessings xxoo

Aditi Mishra
Date: 6/20/2020 12:05:00 PM

I am so glad you love my words Connie. I could pour my feelings for Autumn with those images in my mind that I always relish. Thank you for your kind appreciation and encouragement. God bless you. Much love :)

Mohan Chutani

Date: 6/18/2020 5:10:00 AM

Lovely string of haikus. Congrats. Mohan

Aditi Mishra
Date: 6/18/2020 5:50:00 AM

Thank you for your kind wishes Mohan. Blessings :)

Gregory Richard Barden

Date: 6/18/2020 4:14:00 AM

This is exceptional haiku, Aditi, and to go to that wonderful spot out of season shows your imagination and depth - love it! Congrats, Dear Poet! :o) <3

Aditi Mishra
Date: 6/18/2020 5:50:00 AM

Receiving an appreciation from you is an honor for me. Glad you love my muse Greg. I have always loved Autumn perhaps that's the reason my poetry has glimpses of the season. Thank you for your kind wishes. God bless you :)

Tom Cunningham

Date: 6/18/2020 3:52:00 AM

My favourite season, you've written so well in this string of haiku Aditi. Congrats on your win Tom

Aditi Mishra
Date: 6/18/2020 5:49:00 AM

Autumn is my favorite season as well Tom. Thank you for your kind words of appreciation and wishes. God bless you :)

Susan Ashley

Date: 6/17/2020 7:53:00 PM

I am enchanted by the lush beauty of your Autumn imagery, Aditi. Congratulations on your excellent win with your splendid haiku. Warmest wishes.. ~Susan

Aditi Mishra
Date: 6/18/2020 5:48:00 AM

Glad you loved my words Susan. Autumn is always a treat. Thank you for your gracious wishes. Blessings and love :)

Sam Kauffman

Date: 6/17/2020 6:18:00 PM

"Autumn's adieu kiss," what a lovely "Ku" Aditi. Congratulations on your winning placement.

Aditi Mishra
Date: 6/18/2020 5:47:00 AM

Thank you for your kind words of appreciation Sam. :) Blessings

Jeanne Mcgee

Date: 6/10/2020 4:13:00 PM

it's starts with such grace in silver fog and ends full of longing. beautiful Aditi. Have a wonderful day with much inspiration.

Aditi Mishra
Date: 6/10/2020 4:15:00 PM

Thank you for your loving words and for such a beautiful blessing for inspiration Jeanne! Blessings and love :)

Funom Makama

Date: 6/8/2020 8:05:00 PM

Most profound expressions of your deep thoughts. A great, great piece!

Aditi Mishra
Date: 6/9/2020 8:18:00 AM

Thank you for appreciating my words and for your visit Funom :) God bless you!

Line Gauthier

Date: 6/8/2020 5:34:00 PM

lovely imagery, Aditi ~

Aditi Mishra
Date: 6/9/2020 8:18:00 AM

Thank you so much Line :)

Frances Schiavina

Date: 6/8/2020 10:50:00 AM

Congratulations on your well deserved top win!

Aditi Mishra
Date: 6/8/2020 1:54:00 PM

Thanks for your visit and appreciation Frances :)

L. J. Carber

Date: 6/7/2020 10:18:00 AM

Congrats on your win, Aditi-- lovely!

Aditi Mishra
Date: 6/7/2020 10:19:00 AM

Thank you for your appreciation. Blessings :)

Jcb Brul

Date: 6/7/2020 8:54:00 AM

Such a superb imagery in a Haiku! Congrats.

Aditi Mishra
Date: 6/7/2020 10:17:00 AM

Thank you for your kind words of appreciation and for my placement in your contest :) Blessings and love <3

Patri Venkata Ramana

Date: 6/7/2020 8:07:00 AM

autumn is portrayed wonderfully. excellent verses. congrats!

Aditi Mishra
Date: 6/7/2020 8:26:00 AM

Thank you for your kind wishes :)

Malabika Ray Choudhury

Date: 6/6/2020 4:04:00 PM

Lovely verses, Aditi! Stunning imagery - my favourite is the second one! Congratulations on the win.

Aditi Mishra
Date: 6/6/2020 5:55:00 PM

I am so glad you loved my words Mala. Thank you for your lovely appreciation. God bless you :)

Tom Cunningham

Date: 6/6/2020 3:53:00 PM

Must admit, it's my favourite season, back with congrats on your top win Aditi. Enjoy your weekend Tom

Aditi Mishra
Date: 6/6/2020 5:53:00 PM

Autumn is such a beautiful season. Thank you for your lovely wishes. Have a great weekend Tom. Blessings :)

Sam Kauffman

Date: 6/6/2020 1:25:00 PM

Gold, silver and a kiss good bye - a wonderful picture of autumn, Aditi. Congratulations on your first place win! I really enjoyed this write. Haiku is fin isn't it?

Aditi Mishra
Date: 6/6/2020 1:47:00 PM

Blessed by your kind appreciation Sam. Thank you for the generous encouragement. I agree Haiku is fun, to read and to write :)

Sonia Walker

Date: 6/6/2020 11:30:00 AM

Aditi, lovely verses flow throughout your "Autumn Kiss" entry. Congratulations on your first winning placement. Hugs, Sonia.

Aditi Mishra
Date: 6/6/2020 1:47:00 PM

So glad you loved my words Sonia. Thank you for your wonderful appreciation. Blessings and love :)

Kai Michael Neumann

Date: 6/6/2020 7:46:00 AM

Beautiful ...

Aditi Mishra
Date: 6/6/2020 10:10:00 AM

Thank you for your appreciation Kai :)

Caren Krutsinger

Date: 6/6/2020 6:50:00 AM

I am thrilled to see this was a first place winner as it could not have done anything else.

Aditi Mishra
Date: 6/6/2020 10:09:00 AM

Blessed by your kind words of encouragement Caren. Thank you so much for appreciating. Blessings :)

Jan Allison

Date: 6/6/2020 6:49:00 AM

gorgeous imagery I especially like the middle one:-) hugs Jan xx

Aditi Mishra
Date: 6/6/2020 10:08:00 AM

Glad you loved it Jan! Thank you for your appreciation. Blessings :)

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 6/5/2020 4:51:00 PM

beautiful atumnal images, Aditi!

Aditi Mishra
Date: 6/6/2020 10:08:00 AM

Thank you so much for your appreciation Andrea :)

Rhonda Johnson-Saunders

Date: 6/4/2020 10:39:00 PM

You've created beautiful autumn scenes, Aditi....quite lovely! Best of luck in the contest...xx Rhonda

Aditi Mishra
Date: 6/5/2020 1:56:00 AM

So glad you love them Rhonda. Thank you for your beautiful wishes and appreciation. Much love and blessings :)

Connie Marcum Wong

Date: 6/4/2020 8:37:00 PM

These haiku are very lovely Aditi. Best wishes for a win in the contest. Blessings xxoo

Aditi Mishra
Date: 6/5/2020 1:56:00 AM

Glad you loved them Connie. Thank you so much for your blessings. Much love :)

Regina Mcintosh

Date: 6/4/2020 5:39:00 AM

Lovely haiku. These are such beautiful glimpses into the heart of the poet. Love and prayers for you, Gina

Aditi Mishra
Date: 6/4/2020 7:46:00 AM

Thank you so much for your love and blessings Gina. God bless you :)

Line Gauthier

Date: 6/4/2020 4:20:00 AM

Lovely, Aditi.

Aditi Mishra
Date: 6/4/2020 5:11:00 AM

Thanks for your appreciation Line. Blessings :)