Autumn's Kiss

silver fog blanket shivers to embrace sunshine gliding with the wind ~~~~~~ golden hues tiptoe spread gossamer veil of light over asleep snow ~~~~~~ glistening snow melts, drizzle adorns yellow leaves-- autumn's adieu kiss June 3, 2020 Fresh Traditional HAIKU (5-7-5) Poetry Contest Sponsor: JCB Burl ~Winner: 1st Place Best Haiku Ever Old or New Poetry Contest Sponsor: Chantelle Anne Cooke ~Premiere Contest Winner: 6th Place BRIAN'S SELECT 5,any form,any theme Poetry Contest Sponsor: Brian Strand ~Winner: Honorable Mention
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Marcum Wong Avatar
June 20, 2020 at 6:30 AM
I admire the more traditional Japanese haiku that is usually about a season and nature like the master haiku poets write Aditi, so your entry was very pleasing. These are beautiful! Congratulations on your deserving win my friend! Blessings xxoo
Mishra Avatar
June 20, 2020 at 12:05 PM
I am so glad you love my words Connie. I could pour my feelings for Autumn with those images in my mind that I always relish. Thank you for your kind appreciation and encouragement. God bless you. Much love :)
Chutani Avatar
June 18, 2020 at 5:10 AM
Lovely string of haikus. Congrats. Mohan
Mishra Avatar
June 18, 2020 at 5:50 AM
Thank you for your kind wishes Mohan. Blessings :)
Barden Avatar
June 18, 2020 at 4:14 AM
This is exceptional haiku, Aditi, and to go to that wonderful spot out of season shows your imagination and depth - love it! Congrats, Dear Poet! :o) <3
Mishra Avatar
June 18, 2020 at 5:50 AM
Receiving an appreciation from you is an honor for me. Glad you love my muse Greg. I have always loved Autumn perhaps that's the reason my poetry has glimpses of the season. Thank you for your kind wishes. God bless you :)
Cunningham Avatar
June 18, 2020 at 3:52 AM
My favourite season, you've written so well in this string of haiku Aditi. Congrats on your win Tom
Mishra Avatar
June 18, 2020 at 5:49 AM
Autumn is my favorite season as well Tom. Thank you for your kind words of appreciation and wishes. God bless you :)
Ashley Avatar
June 17, 2020 at 7:53 PM
I am enchanted by the lush beauty of your Autumn imagery, Aditi. Congratulations on your excellent win with your splendid haiku. Warmest wishes.. ~Susan
Mishra Avatar
June 18, 2020 at 5:48 AM
Glad you loved my words Susan. Autumn is always a treat. Thank you for your gracious wishes. Blessings and love :)
Kauffman Avatar
June 17, 2020 at 6:18 PM
"Autumn's adieu kiss," what a lovely "Ku" Aditi. Congratulations on your winning placement.
Mishra Avatar
June 18, 2020 at 5:47 AM
Thank you for your kind words of appreciation Sam. :) Blessings
Mcgee Avatar
June 10, 2020 at 4:13 PM
it's starts with such grace in silver fog and ends full of longing. beautiful Aditi. Have a wonderful day with much inspiration.
Mishra Avatar
June 10, 2020 at 4:15 PM
Thank you for your loving words and for such a beautiful blessing for inspiration Jeanne! Blessings and love :)
Makama Avatar
June 8, 2020 at 8:05 PM
Most profound expressions of your deep thoughts. A great, great piece!
Mishra Avatar
June 9, 2020 at 8:18 AM
Thank you for appreciating my words and for your visit Funom :) God bless you!
Gauthier Avatar
June 8, 2020 at 5:34 PM
lovely imagery, Aditi ~
Mishra Avatar
June 9, 2020 at 8:18 AM
Thank you so much Line :)
Schiavina Avatar
June 8, 2020 at 10:50 AM
Congratulations on your well deserved top win!
Mishra Avatar
June 8, 2020 at 1:54 PM
Thanks for your visit and appreciation Frances :)
Carber Avatar
June 7, 2020 at 10:18 AM
Congrats on your win, Aditi-- lovely!
Mishra Avatar
June 7, 2020 at 10:19 AM
Thank you for your appreciation. Blessings :)
Brul Avatar
June 7, 2020 at 8:54 AM
Such a superb imagery in a Haiku! Congrats.
Mishra Avatar
June 7, 2020 at 10:17 AM
Thank you for your kind words of appreciation and for my placement in your contest :) Blessings and love <3
Venkata Ramana Avatar
June 7, 2020 at 8:07 AM
autumn is portrayed wonderfully. excellent verses. congrats!
Mishra Avatar
June 7, 2020 at 8:26 AM
Thank you for your kind wishes :)
Ray Choudhury Avatar
June 6, 2020 at 4:04 PM
Lovely verses, Aditi! Stunning imagery - my favourite is the second one! Congratulations on the win.
Mishra Avatar
June 6, 2020 at 5:55 PM
I am so glad you loved my words Mala. Thank you for your lovely appreciation. God bless you :)
Cunningham Avatar
June 6, 2020 at 3:53 PM
Must admit, it's my favourite season, back with congrats on your top win Aditi. Enjoy your weekend Tom
Mishra Avatar
June 6, 2020 at 5:53 PM
Autumn is such a beautiful season. Thank you for your lovely wishes. Have a great weekend Tom. Blessings :)
Kauffman Avatar
June 6, 2020 at 1:25 PM
Gold, silver and a kiss good bye - a wonderful picture of autumn, Aditi. Congratulations on your first place win! I really enjoyed this write. Haiku is fin isn't it?
Mishra Avatar
June 6, 2020 at 1:47 PM
Blessed by your kind appreciation Sam. Thank you for the generous encouragement. I agree Haiku is fun, to read and to write :)
Walker Avatar
June 6, 2020 at 11:30 AM
Aditi, lovely verses flow throughout your "Autumn Kiss" entry. Congratulations on your first winning placement. Hugs, Sonia.
Mishra Avatar
June 6, 2020 at 1:47 PM
So glad you loved my words Sonia. Thank you for your wonderful appreciation. Blessings and love :)
Neumann Avatar
June 6, 2020 at 7:46 AM
Beautiful ...
Mishra Avatar
June 6, 2020 at 10:10 AM
Thank you for your appreciation Kai :)
Krutsinger Avatar
June 6, 2020 at 6:50 AM
I am thrilled to see this was a first place winner as it could not have done anything else.
Mishra Avatar
June 6, 2020 at 10:09 AM
Blessed by your kind words of encouragement Caren. Thank you so much for appreciating. Blessings :)
Allison Avatar
June 6, 2020 at 6:49 AM
gorgeous imagery I especially like the middle one:-) hugs Jan xx
Mishra Avatar
June 6, 2020 at 10:08 AM
Glad you loved it Jan! Thank you for your appreciation. Blessings :)
Dietrich Avatar
June 5, 2020 at 4:51 PM
beautiful atumnal images, Aditi!
Mishra Avatar
June 6, 2020 at 10:08 AM
Thank you so much for your appreciation Andrea :)
Johnson-Saunders Avatar
June 4, 2020 at 10:39 PM
You've created beautiful autumn scenes, Aditi....quite lovely! Best of luck in the contest...xx Rhonda
Mishra Avatar
June 5, 2020 at 1:56 AM
So glad you love them Rhonda. Thank you for your beautiful wishes and appreciation. Much love and blessings :)
Marcum Wong Avatar
June 4, 2020 at 8:37 PM
These haiku are very lovely Aditi. Best wishes for a win in the contest. Blessings xxoo
Mishra Avatar
June 5, 2020 at 1:56 AM
Glad you loved them Connie. Thank you so much for your blessings. Much love :)
Mcintosh Avatar
June 4, 2020 at 5:39 AM
Lovely haiku. These are such beautiful glimpses into the heart of the poet. Love and prayers for you, Gina
Mishra Avatar
June 4, 2020 at 7:46 AM
Thank you so much for your love and blessings Gina. God bless you :)
Gauthier Avatar
June 4, 2020 at 4:20 AM
Lovely, Aditi.
Mishra Avatar
June 4, 2020 at 5:11 AM
Thanks for your appreciation Line. Blessings :)
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