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Autumns Hitch

Autumn surrounds the lake Vibrancy vivacious, romantic Blue in the rippling eye Dark speck, a boat Grows bigger and bigger The laughter Her auburn hair thrown back, Her subtle loveliness He stares at the landscape of love Day bellows in briskness And a tartan blanket Smoothed on her lap A sporty arm around her shoulder Shadows falling effervescent Sweethearts head for home Trees retreat into dusk Crunch of falling leaves underfoot Spark of embers dying Flame of color extinguished Except for her lips Pressed into his memory book Soft, blush, frolic Of a burgeoning wish Small leaf adrift on tranquil waters Occupier eyes the couple with jealousy A miniature copy, this sister a faerie Speckled toadstool over her head She conjures a rainstorm To get goody two shoes wet But she slips into his arms He asks Rainstorm pulls the lovers along To make a permanent hitch A flying leaf, a faerie aboard Stomps her teeny tiny feet Wipes away her tears Gives in, wishes well For their happily ever after 11/18/2020

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Date: 10/19/2020 1:41:00 PM
Autumn memories. Something about Autumn that does appeal. Real poetry here which most can relate to and appreciate. Thanks for posting - regards David in NZ. it is spring over here although weather is slightly fickle.
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 10/19/2020 2:41:00 PM
Thank you, David of NZ! :)
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 10/19/2020 1:52:00 PM
Thank you, David of NZ! :)
Date: 10/19/2020 2:57:00 AM
Trees retreat into dusk Crunch of falling leaves underfoot Spark of embers dying Flame of color extinguished... Lovely lovely lines, vivid imagery and romantic words... just lovely...
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 10/19/2020 5:26:00 AM
Thanks so much! That means a lot, Silent!
Date: 10/18/2020 11:06:00 PM
Great fantasy poem with lively images. Popular all around with its sweet ending. ~~
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 10/19/2020 5:27:00 AM
Thank you, Victor!
Date: 10/18/2020 8:20:00 PM
A dream of a love narrative, Kim. Every line precious. Right into my FAVES. I was entranced. Thanks for hypnotizing me! Waves and Wonder, Gershon
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 10/18/2020 9:46:00 PM
Thanks so much, Gershon! :)
Date: 10/18/2020 6:30:00 PM
I love happily ever afters. A well written poem dear Kim, thank you for sharing it. God bless.
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 10/18/2020 7:56:00 PM
Thank you, Pixie! xx

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