Autumns Hitch

Autumn surrounds the lake
Vibrancy vivacious, romantic
Blue in the rippling eye
Dark speck, a boat

Grows bigger and bigger
The laughter
Her auburn hair thrown back,
Her subtle loveliness
He stares at the landscape of love

Day bellows in briskness
And a tartan blanket
Smoothed on her lap

A sporty arm around her shoulder
Shadows falling effervescent
Sweethearts head for home

Trees retreat into dusk
Crunch of falling leaves underfoot
Spark of embers dying
Flame of color extinguished

Except for her lips
Pressed into his memory book
Soft, blush, frolic
Of a burgeoning wish

Small leaf adrift on tranquil waters
Occupier eyes the couple with jealousy
A miniature copy, this sister a faerie
Speckled toadstool over her head
She conjures a rainstorm
To get goody two shoes wet

But she slips into his arms
He asks

Rainstorm pulls the lovers along
To make a permanent hitch

A flying leaf, a faerie aboard
Stomps her teeny tiny feet
Wipes away her tears

Gives in, wishes well
For their happily ever after

11/18/2020

Copyright © | Year Posted 2020



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Date: 10/19/2020 1:41:00 PM
Autumn memories. Something about Autumn that does appeal. Real poetry here which most can relate to and appreciate. Thanks for posting - regards David in NZ. it is spring over here although weather is slightly fickle.
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 10/19/2020 2:41:00 PM
Thank you, David of NZ! :)
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 10/19/2020 1:52:00 PM
Thank you, David of NZ! :)
Date: 10/19/2020 2:57:00 AM
Trees retreat into dusk Crunch of falling leaves underfoot Spark of embers dying Flame of color extinguished... Lovely lovely lines, vivid imagery and romantic words... just lovely...
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 10/19/2020 5:26:00 AM
Thanks so much! That means a lot, Silent!
Date: 10/18/2020 11:06:00 PM
Great fantasy poem with lively images. Popular all around with its sweet ending. ~~
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 10/19/2020 5:27:00 AM
Thank you, Victor!
Date: 10/18/2020 8:20:00 PM
A dream of a love narrative, Kim. Every line precious. Right into my FAVES. I was entranced. Thanks for hypnotizing me! Waves and Wonder, Gershon
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 10/18/2020 9:46:00 PM
Thanks so much, Gershon! :)
Date: 10/18/2020 6:30:00 PM
I love happily ever afters. A well written poem dear Kim, thank you for sharing it. God bless.
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 10/18/2020 7:56:00 PM
Thank you, Pixie! xx
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