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Autumn’s Heat

A leaf dances in an autumn breeze, my soul suddenly feels cold. I'm anticipating summer's death. Life of yesterday won't escape tomorrow's grasp. Fate can be cruel, but only God knows why living things have to die. Colder weather initiates coming holidays. Joy fills people's hearts, kindness is catching. Spread Love around. Hearts remain stable till spring.

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Tonye George

Date: 3/24/2024 8:54:00 PM

Indeed, only he knows. Lovely piece Marie.

Yolanda Nicholsen

Date: 3/21/2024 5:28:00 AM

Lovely write beautifully expressed

Carolyn Marie Baatz
Date: 3/21/2024 6:48:00 AM

Thank you so much.

Hilda Greenhough

Date: 3/19/2024 4:56:00 PM

A great poem. Though a distance away, it will happen.

Carolyn Marie Baatz
Date: 3/21/2024 6:49:00 AM

Thank you for your response.

Silpika Kalita

Date: 3/19/2024 4:43:00 AM

Spring is on the way, there is optimum light in the poem despite the gloominess of the milieu. That's what the transformation a poem can portray with vivid visual imageries. If time permits may visit my page. I respect people who adore nature. Have a blessed day ahead

Carolyn Marie Baatz
Date: 3/21/2024 6:50:00 AM

Thank you, I will visit your page.