Autumns Gentle Outcome

Autumn colours bloom Gently they drift on the breeze Skeletal outcome .

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Maurice Yvonne

Date: 9/8/2014 8:53:00 PM

I love this. I really like your comment to Jan. You have a great mind James. thanks for the read.

James Fraser
Date: 9/9/2014 4:46:00 PM

Your welcome, but it's me who should thank you for the lovely comments, James........

Tim Smith

Date: 9/8/2014 5:59:00 PM

Yes James a beautiful time of year...we are just getting a taste of it here...within three weeks it will be full blown.

James Fraser
Date: 9/9/2014 4:35:00 PM

Autumn is nearly upon us here also. Can't wait as every Autumn is different, James :)

Jan Allison

Date: 9/8/2014 4:23:00 PM

lovely imagery James love the final line! Hugs jan xxx

Jan Allison
Date: 9/8/2014 4:29:00 PM

I agree James my favourite time of year too:-) hugs Jan x

James Fraser
Date: 9/8/2014 4:27:00 PM

Autumn is my favourite season. Leaves in various colours of demise, as if they're putting on a final show before they drift to decay and allow life to live on them. Thanks Jan xx