Jean Murray Poet Rhyme

Autumn's Fall

Frozen flakes on my windowpane
tell me Autumn has left again.
Crystals forming on the glass
whisper that season now has passed.


28/05/2016.


Taken from AS AUTUMN'S BREEZE 
for Gregory R Barden's 
'Rithimus Divisa 6' Poetry Contest

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Eve Roper January 14, 2021 at 11:28 AM The weather sure has done a lot of change these few years. Like the imagery, Jean. Hugs Eve Jean Murray January 14, 2021 at 1:54 PM Although we have not had any snow worth talking about yet Eve, I still get a bit of SAD now and again.

James Inman October 3, 2020 at 9:48 AM A lovely image filled rhyme. Jean Murray October 3, 2020 at 12:58 PM Thank you James for taking a peek.

Anne-Lise Andresen September 22, 2020 at 7:44 AM - A beautiful picture ... but cold, Jean ... I hope there is a bit left of autumn ... I have been out and photographed the colors of autumn today :) - Best wishes in the contest :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :) Jean Murray September 22, 2020 at 9:19 AM Hello Sunshine. Autumn is a favourite time of mine. We have had some unusually mild weather here and are soaking up the last rays. Thank you as always for your good wishes.

Tom Cunningham September 22, 2020 at 6:38 AM I can feel the chill in your verse Jean. Good luck in the contest. Hope you're well. Tom Jean Murray September 22, 2020 at 9:17 AM Hi Tom. I'm good thank you. It's a strange world these days, but thankfully me and mine are keeping well. I hope you and yours are too.