Autumn's Fall

The breeze chills branches
as leaves (and expectations)
relinquish their grace,

abandoning all thoughts of
inevitable rebirth
Copyright © | Year Posted 2008

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October 18, 2008 at 10:08 AM
Congratulations Tracy on your win in Kristin's contest. This is truly beautiful. Peace always, John
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October 13, 2008 at 4:11 PM
I'm in awe of your talent, Tracy. I love the depth of your poetry, ...this is no exception! ~ Carrie
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October 12, 2008 at 2:07 PM
Interesting use of personification. So much depth to this poem. Congratulations on placing second in Kristin's contest! Wishing you continued success with your writing. Karen
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October 12, 2008 at 9:58 AM
Warmest congrats dear Tracy on your Second Place win in Kristin's contest! So awesome and well deserved! Love, Shar xoxo
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October 10, 2008 at 4:15 AM
Tracy, you are amazing. Cannot believe you even placed me in your contest. You have no idea how much it means to me, considering your incredible talent. This poem speaks volumes. So excellent. Love, Shar
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