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Autumn's Fall

Summer’s fall is just a state of mind;
the trees, you know, look forward to the rest.
And summer won’t mind being left behind:
each season hopes the next in line is blessed.

Though winter thaws bring loveliest of flowers;
they can’t withstand the long hot summer hours.
So, they make way for sun and waterplay;
grateful they brought happiness in May.

Then summer, in the spotlight getting scorched,
looks forward to a cold drink on the porch.
An early rise each day all season long
and late-night hours suggest it can’t be wrong...

For summer to bow gracefully to fall
for fall will welcome winter like the rest.
Though winter, at times, puts us to the test...
Each season proves the very best of all!




*10/10/19

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Smita Kulkarni October 12, 2019 at 2:20 PM So true! Every season has a reason and has its own beauty. You have expressed it so nicely! Hello There October 12, 2019 at 4:34 PM Thank you so much, Smita, for your kind words ~ and thank you for stopping by :)

Andrea Dietrich October 11, 2019 at 1:53 PM This is a very nice way of looking at things. Seeing the best in nature's turn of seasons. Hello There October 11, 2019 at 4:01 PM Thank you, Andrea ~ just trying to pen a different perspective, for fun ;)

Panagiota Romios October 11, 2019 at 11:43 AM Perfect to the Max. PR Hello There October 11, 2019 at 1:20 PM Why, thank you, PR! :)

Sandra Adams October 10, 2019 at 9:30 AM such a beautifully penned poem for the change of all the seasons...i know what they all are needed and see the beauty in all...just like certain ones less...wonderful write my friend :) hugs Sandra Adams October 10, 2019 at 10:36 AM Thank you my friend...i feel honored...i was october born but really dislike this time of year...would love to be able to view it as others do...hugs :) Hello There October 10, 2019 at 10:27 AM Lol, my friend. This was written especially with you in mind ~ I think I can spend some time making it better, longer, or more eloquent, but in a poem of yours there was longing for a new perspective, so I thought I'd pen one quick ;) hugs

Chris Green October 10, 2019 at 7:09 AM The beauty and nature of each season is captured in your wonderful poem in glorious shades and feelings. Your words ring true, there is something magical about each season as it arrives. Hello There October 10, 2019 at 10:23 AM Thank you for your generous feedback, my friend. Just having fun trying to shed new light on the season ;)

Vijay Pandit October 10, 2019 at 5:57 AM Unique take on why the seasons change--cleverly articulated, HT. Photo is awesome and it speaks splendidly in your poem. Hello There October 10, 2019 at 10:19 AM Thank you, Vijay ~ I'm so glad you enjoyed this little ditty :)

Jan Allison October 10, 2019 at 4:43 AM I adore the first stanza especially the trees looking forward to a rest, I will always think of that now autumn is here, beautifully crafted poem:-) Hugs Jan xx Hello There October 10, 2019 at 10:16 AM Lol. Thank you so much, Jan ~ just having fun with a new perspective on the changing of seasons ;)

Regina Mcintosh October 10, 2019 at 2:06 AM This is a beautifully rhymed poem that I love dearly. It's a Autumn blessing for sure. God bless you and love and prayers, Gina Hello There October 10, 2019 at 10:14 AM Thank you so much, Gina <3