Autumns Eye Appeal

Such beauty I see
Where the stems to blossom die
Citrus and saffron
To a fashionably end
Meant for eyes to encounter
Copyright © | Year Posted 2008

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September 27, 2008 at 5:13 PM
Nice use of imagery that captures the feel of autumn. I hope you are entering the tanka contest with your poem. Good luck if you are. Thank you for adding to "Tidbits." I added your thoughts in two lines and did a minor edit. I hope that is OK with you. I am excited to see how it progresses. Keep on writing! Karen
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September 26, 2008 at 5:21 AM
"Meant for eyes to encounter." Yes! A very deep message in so few words. Love it! Love, Daver
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September 25, 2008 at 3:49 PM
this smells sensational, a paints a vivid image, take care D-nyce
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September 25, 2008 at 11:35 AM
a very colorful and gentle piece of poetry.
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September 23, 2008 at 5:42 AM
Pretty write of the season! Love "Citrus and saffron"! Awesome! Love, Shar
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