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Autumns Eye Appeal

Such beauty I see Where the stems to blossom die Citrus and saffron To a fashionably end Meant for eyes to encounter

Copyright © | Year Posted 2008




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Date: 9/27/2008 5:13:00 PM
Nice use of imagery that captures the feel of autumn. I hope you are entering the tanka contest with your poem. Good luck if you are. Thank you for adding to "Tidbits." I added your thoughts in two lines and did a minor edit. I hope that is OK with you. I am excited to see how it progresses. Keep on writing! Karen
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Date: 9/26/2008 5:21:00 AM
"Meant for eyes to encounter." Yes! A very deep message in so few words. Love it! Love, Daver
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Date: 9/25/2008 3:49:00 PM
this smells sensational, a paints a vivid image, take care D-nyce
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Date: 9/25/2008 11:35:00 AM
a very colorful and gentle piece of poetry.
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Date: 9/23/2008 5:42:00 AM
Pretty write of the season! Love "Citrus and saffron"! Awesome! Love, Shar
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