Autumn's End

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gold autumn leaves cling to blackened skeletal trees winter’s first snow melts poet walks away with suitcase red umbrella’s protection

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Jack Horne

Date: 11/23/2018 3:23:00 PM

really like the vivid descriptions here - great tanka

Sara Kendrick
Date: 11/24/2018 6:46:00 AM

Jack, Thanks for the kind review of my work. I appreciate you stopping by. Sara

Maurice Rigoler

Date: 11/12/2018 6:18:00 PM

Hello Sara, long time no hear! Our autumn was dismal this year, no more than three days of some color, then rain and lots of wind. We don't expect snow until December. No matter I'm too old to appreciate it now. Happy to know you're still writing poems. Many thanks for stopping by. / M

Sara Kendrick
Date: 11/13/2018 7:35:00 AM

Maurice, This was not about me or my area but just imagination about the picture or a picture like this one. We had some wind and rain which destroyed some leaves and twigs on the trees and also a long dry spell this autumn which made the leaves not as pretty as they have been. We do not have snow every year usually about 10 years apart but we never know here in the south what we will get in the winter. Thanks for stopping by. Sara

Paul Callus

Date: 11/7/2018 1:09:00 PM

A striking autumnal image, Sara. The poet walks by accompanied by a faithful muse...a friend for all seasons! ~ Regards // paul

Sara Kendrick
Date: 11/7/2018 1:32:00 PM

Paul, Thanks for the kind review of my work. Your presence at my page is uplifting. Sara

M. L. Kiser

Date: 11/6/2018 1:48:00 PM

Beautiful imagery in this piece. Well done.

Sara Kendrick
Date: 11/6/2018 2:50:00 PM

M.L. Thanks for the kind review. Your presence is appreciated. Sara

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 11/4/2018 12:11:00 PM

The transition from fall to winter is vividly described in your lovely poem, Sara. Enjoyed!

Sara Kendrick
Date: 11/5/2018 11:20:00 AM

Carolyn, Thanks for dropping by. Soon we will face winter but we'll bask in a little fall now. SK