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Autumn's Door

Creedence aligned along the corridores of passage Which usher in through the portends This Autumn's door.... Such colourful banners a latitudes sprinkling Flowering waters of repose that still echo Inside, these sanctuaries walls Guarded by the sentry whom stands at their gate The entrance unto the destined temple Of the blessed, as eternal Soul.... Silver and gold adorning nativities scene A sacred reminder of divinities call To have and to hold such prophetical promises Profound, laid afore this starlit altar Treasures as verse whose words do echo Atop the tumbling of her organs keys.... Assembling choirs their Angelic voices Proclaiming these melodies in harmonic chords Whileas the infant smiled, and gazed into the future *********************************************** ..In, through the Autumn's Door ~

Copyright © | Year Posted 2013




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Date: 6/27/2013 11:59:00 AM
Johnny ~ This was so lovely. I thought of a large church choir and baby Jesus in the manger too. I could see the passage so colorful to heaven and well guarded. You made it very real for me.
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Date: 6/16/2013 7:33:00 PM
Sounds like the soul at the gates of heaven coming out instead of in. Very beautiful words and images
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Date: 6/13/2013 12:48:00 AM
This is very soothing and beautifully flowing....Wonderful! :) yes...there is that ethereal feel to it. Thanks so much for your lovely visits to my work. Your kind posts are always appreciated....
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Date: 5/30/2013 9:27:00 PM
Nicely done. I like this mental picture - JH
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Date: 5/24/2013 2:57:00 PM
John reading this poem i travelled back to when i was just a child singing in a choir at the church i used to attend..It really sent me back to my peace with God..Just beautiful..-always Charma
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Date: 5/24/2013 1:25:00 PM
- A very talented poem and messages, John! - I wish you a restful weekend. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)
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