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Autumns Approach

gloomy skies and wind
fanfare of autumns approach ~
the first crisp leaf falls





written 5th September 2019
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Romios Avatar
October 22, 2019 at 3:26 AM
A fabulous haiku Tom, hope all well with you. Panagota
Cunningham Avatar
October 22, 2019 at 12:34 PM
Thanks very much Panagiota, happy you liked it. Everything going ok thanks, hope you're well. Tom
One Avatar
September 8, 2019 at 7:49 AM
You captured the imagery perfectly..
Cunningham Avatar
September 8, 2019 at 11:10 AM
Thanks S.O, although its been like a summers day there's a chill in the mornings and evenings. Tom
Onclaud Avatar
September 8, 2019 at 5:48 AM
waiting for late october and hoping to watch those crunchy leaves cascade when i go abroad, tom... travel makes you well oiled!...huggs
Cunningham Avatar
September 8, 2019 at 11:07 AM
Thanks nette, where you headed?
Rodrigues Avatar
September 8, 2019 at 5:12 AM
Excited for Fall. Doing a Fall cruise...let the crisping begin. Nice one!
Cunningham Avatar
September 8, 2019 at 9:33 AM
Thanks Kim, bet you can't wait. Tom
Proxenos Avatar
September 8, 2019 at 4:18 AM
Autumn is on the mind of more than half of poetry soup, hey South Africans how about writing about our awesome Spring. A wonderful write Tom and best for a win. Half way with packing - have to be out by the end of October and still no decision on what we are going to call 'Home" yet. Hugs, Jennifer.
Cunningham Avatar
September 8, 2019 at 9:31 AM
Thanks very much Jennifer, its a stressful time moving, hope it all goes well. Tom
Dietrich Avatar
September 7, 2019 at 10:39 AM
Love that first "crisp" leaf. Autumn congures up such crispness for me. well done.
Cunningham Avatar
September 7, 2019 at 3:13 PM
Thank Andrea, a beautiful season for sure. Tom
Romios Avatar
September 7, 2019 at 4:51 AM
Oh, hoping you win! Panagiota
Cunningham Avatar
September 7, 2019 at 10:03 AM
Thank you Panagiota, autumn has arrived early here. Tom.
Chiri Avatar
September 6, 2019 at 6:52 AM
Very nice Tom was s pleasure to read!;)
Cunningham Avatar
September 6, 2019 at 12:04 PM
Thanks very much Brenda, many mourn summers passing but I love the autumn. Tom.
Mcguire Avatar
September 5, 2019 at 9:58 PM
Love it! Old man winter is on the way
Cunningham Avatar
September 5, 2019 at 11:48 PM
Thanks Timothy, it sure is, colder mornings already here. Tom
Sands Avatar
September 5, 2019 at 1:12 PM
Very nice Tom. We are entering a beautiful season. The colors will be brilliant :)
Cunningham Avatar
September 5, 2019 at 1:19 PM
Thank you Heidi, the beautiful colours never cease to amaze me, Tom
Pigeon Tart Avatar
September 5, 2019 at 8:08 AM
It is a perfect haiku. Masterfully done. A fave, xomo!
Cunningham Avatar
September 5, 2019 at 12:33 PM
Thanks very much Maureen, autumn happening quickly here now. Tom
Andresen Avatar
September 5, 2019 at 7:31 AM
- A beauty sign from nature, lovely written Tom - GL. in the contest :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Cunningham Avatar
September 5, 2019 at 12:30 PM
Thanks very much Anne, was looking in my garden today and my muse gave me that one. Tom
Pandit Avatar
September 5, 2019 at 7:22 AM
So well done, Tom--I see that falling leaf in your words..a TOP win for you. Have you been away??
Cunningham Avatar
September 5, 2019 at 12:29 PM
Thanks Vijay, yes, been away to the south coast for my daughters 40th birthday,back home now trying to catch up on here lol. Hope all's well. Tom
Michael Avatar
September 5, 2019 at 5:54 AM
Then soon it's Christmas...the leaves of time...Nice imagery Tom...feel too
Cunningham Avatar
September 5, 2019 at 7:07 AM
Thanks Arturo, cant believe how the year has flown. Tom
Allison Avatar
September 5, 2019 at 5:38 AM
simply gorgeous Tom:-) I do love this time of year!:-) hugs Jan xx
Cunningham Avatar
September 5, 2019 at 7:07 AM
Thanks Jan, can't wait for the autumn colours. Tom.
Mcintosh Avatar
September 5, 2019 at 5:36 AM
Love fall and your poem. Blessings.
Cunningham Avatar
September 5, 2019 at 7:06 AM
Thank you Regina, my favourite season too. Tom
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September 5, 2019 at 5:11 AM
Lovely haiku Tom.
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