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AUTUMNAL WHIMSY

AUTUMNAL WHIMSY a late blooming few rose leaves with mottled silver autumnal whimsy

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010




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Date: 7/27/2014 11:28:00 PM
Nice seasonal poem here! You stuck to the 5 7 5 formula which is all to the good. Peace & Blessings Matthew Anish
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Date: 6/28/2014 1:27:00 PM
Daver, I am seeing your "BEST POEMS" list. This tops the chart. I remember I had faved it. It is your number one at Soup. Let me go see your second best one, according to the list.
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Date: 11/24/2010 4:47:00 PM
Good use of imagery in this poem. Thank you for your kind comment. Happy Thanksgiving! Karen
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Date: 11/8/2010 2:19:00 PM
i'm gone for a while and now you post a lot,,, Good Daver A., better late than never.. enjoyed your haiku.. have a good one,..p.d.
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Date: 11/5/2010 3:05:00 PM
Good use of imagery for a creative view. Keep on writing and sharing your words. Have a good weekend. Karen
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Date: 11/3/2010 5:07:00 PM
Fine haiku! and you stuck to 5-7-5 which is one good way of writing haiku. Yours Matthew Anish
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Date: 11/2/2010 11:07:00 AM
Dave, I love your second line of your haiku. Beautiful write. Hope your Tuesday's been good ;) love Wilma
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Date: 11/1/2010 10:36:00 PM
Clever and lovely, Daver. This deserves a fav!
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Date: 11/1/2010 4:20:00 PM
Great "whimsical" look at fall, Daver. Can't help it but I'm still laughing after reading your Post Halloween poem!! Love, Carolyn
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Date: 11/1/2010 10:53:00 AM
Exceptionally beautiful writing Daver. Love, Carol
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Date: 11/1/2010 2:53:00 AM
blew me away, daver.. enjoyed this ku... thanks for visiting my page as well. :) warmest, nette
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Date: 10/31/2010 5:44:00 PM
enjoyed reading yor work!
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Date: 10/31/2010 4:53:00 PM
An exquisite painting here, Dave.. Another one..just simply beautiful! Love, Audrey
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Date: 10/31/2010 10:00:00 AM
Nice picture you have painted of the autumn with good images and about to say goodbye, daver
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Date: 10/31/2010 8:34:00 AM
Whimsy is one of my favorite words..thanks for this beauty..BG
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Date: 10/31/2010 8:01:00 AM
oh the defiant tragic beauty of it all! Wonderfully descriptive imagery in your ability to capture the beauty and nature of nature itself! Awesome Daver! Into my favs. Love it -Bob
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Date: 10/31/2010 7:56:00 AM
lovely imagery Dave, much enjoyed
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