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Autumnal Whimsy

AUTUMNAL WHIMSY

a late blooming few
rose leaves with mottled silver
autumnal whimsy

naturehaiku

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Matthew Anish

July 27, 2014 at 11:28 PM

Nice seasonal poem here! You stuck to the 5 7 5 formula which is all to the good. Peace & Blessings Matthew Anish

Andrea Dietrich

June 28, 2014 at 1:27 PM

Daver, I am seeing your "BEST POEMS" list. This tops the chart. I remember I had faved it. It is your number one at Soup. Let me go see your second best one, according to the list.

November 24, 2010 at 4:47 PM

Good use of imagery in this poem. Thank you for your kind comment. Happy Thanksgiving! Karen

Poet Destroyer A

November 8, 2010 at 2:19 PM

i'm gone for a while and now you post a lot,,, Good Daver A., better late than never.. enjoyed your haiku.. have a good one,..p.d.

November 5, 2010 at 3:05 PM

Good use of imagery for a creative view. Keep on writing and sharing your words. Have a good weekend. Karen

Matthew Anish

November 3, 2010 at 5:07 PM

Fine haiku! and you stuck to 5-7-5 which is one good way of writing haiku. Yours Matthew Anish

Wilma Neels

November 2, 2010 at 11:07 AM

Dave, I love your second line of your haiku. Beautiful write. Hope your Tuesday's been good ;) love Wilma

Andrea Dietrich

November 1, 2010 at 10:36 PM

Clever and lovely, Daver. This deserves a fav!

Carolyn Devonshire

November 1, 2010 at 4:20 PM

Great "whimsical" look at fall, Daver. Can't help it but I'm still laughing after reading your Post Halloween poem!! Love, Carolyn

Carol Sunshine Brown

November 1, 2010 at 10:53 AM

Exceptionally beautiful writing Daver. Love, Carol

Nette Onclaud

November 1, 2010 at 2:53 AM

blew me away, daver.. enjoyed this ku... thanks for visiting my page as well. :) warmest, nette

Doris Culverhouse

October 31, 2010 at 5:44 PM

enjoyed reading yor work!

Audrey Haick

October 31, 2010 at 4:53 PM

An exquisite painting here, Dave.. Another one..just simply beautiful! Love, Audrey

Dr.Ram Mehta

October 31, 2010 at 10:00 AM

Nice picture you have painted of the autumn with good images and about to say goodbye, daver

Barbara Gorelick

October 31, 2010 at 8:34 AM

Whimsy is one of my favorite words..thanks for this beauty..BG

Robert A. Dufresne

October 31, 2010 at 8:01 AM

oh the defiant tragic beauty of it all! Wonderfully descriptive imagery in your ability to capture the beauty and nature of nature itself! Awesome Daver! Into my favs. Love it -Bob