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Autumnal Visions

As Autumn exhibits seasonal changes that abound Undeniable is the glorious beauty that can be found Tree foliage is a burnished canopy, gilded by the sun Upon the land, there is harvesting work to be done Mother Nature ripens fields, crops of yellow maize North winds begin to blow, and shortened are days Autumn paints with colors of rust, crimson and gold Lovely are hills of maple and birch, visions to behold Vagabond avian fly south, in need of warmer weather I am in awe of their formation as they flock together September stirs my soul with picturesque perfection Inspiring me for the next month with rapt reflection October, harbinger of Halloween ghosts and treats Nights for dancing beneath the stars on city streets Splendid vistas of Fall are culpable for my heart beats September 27, 2021 Autumn Acrostic Poetry Contest Sponsored by Caren Krutsinger

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Date: 10/14/2021 11:14:00 AM
Congratulations on your win Jenna. Love your word usage - "culpable for my heart beats!" Charming, full of delight and joy. Blessings of the season to you!
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Date: 10/14/2021 9:57:00 AM
Great writing with beautiful imagery. Congratulations!
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Date: 9/27/2021 9:59:00 AM
Beautiful, exquisite writing. I'm so glad I'm not judging this contest. I have read some fine autumn acrostics, but this one is clearly right up there at the top, I'd think. Like Jan said "best entry I have seen so far..." I guess I can withdraw my paltry effort! Good stuff!
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Jenna Logan
Date: 9/27/2021 10:55:00 AM
You will not withdraw your entry! I sincerely thank you for the admirable remarks, Milt.
Date: 9/27/2021 8:55:00 AM
the best entry i have seen so far so rich with autumnal imagery, love the vagabond avians, that made me smile as i love to see the birds fly in formation:-) a huge fave for me, makes my entry look poor. hugs jan xx
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Jenna Logan
Date: 9/27/2021 9:05:00 AM
I thank you for your inspiring compliments, Jan, but nothing you write is poor. Thanks for the fave.
Date: 9/27/2021 8:08:00 AM
Grand picture of the Fall. The phrase vagabond avian surprised me a lot. Best for a win.
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Jenna Logan
Date: 9/27/2021 8:53:00 AM
Many thanks for your visits and remarks, Victor.
Date: 9/27/2021 7:38:00 AM
Oh so visual, Jenna, Autumn is truly a season of splendid colours and wondrous poetic words of poetry, of which your pen certainly enhances the theme.
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Jenna Logan
Date: 9/27/2021 8:52:00 AM
Thank you so much for your thoughts, Harry. Compliments that I value. Nice to see you.
Date: 9/27/2021 7:04:00 AM
Everything about my favourite season of autumn you've captured here in your well written acrostic, the cooler weather and what I always love to see is the geese flying south honking and hinking in v formation. Tom
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Jenna Logan
Date: 9/27/2021 8:52:00 AM
I'll not rob you of your basket filled with N/As, Tom. I have more than enough. ha ha. I can't believe I even started entering contests again, but time is a commodity I have lots of again.
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Tom Cunningham
Date: 9/27/2021 7:30:00 AM
Well I am surprised Jenna,your entries were perfect. Still think a panel would be a better way rather than one person but that's just my opinion. As for n/a's I've got loads you can have lol.
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Jenna Logan
Date: 9/27/2021 7:08:00 AM
Can I nominate you to help judge this contest, Tom? lol I'm on a losing streak...2 N/As in the last 2 days. My Frankenstein party was a loser, and so was my Gaseous Squeaker. I'm delighted to learn that you liked my entry. I find Autumn to be an invigorating time of year.

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