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Autumnal impressions

After flaunting her wares and dazzling our eyes Her energy ebbing ,motivation low It should come to us as no surprise That her colours fade to no linger glow She does now sedately and sombrely dress Though it still being in her nature to tease With the whispering wind she conspires to impress Her onlookers as she strips to please This seasonally haunting dance of the seven veils With her fluttering leaves of russet ,brown and gold Amid the showers of which us she richly hails Shows that she does not fear being so bold Autumn even with her loss of lively chirping Displays a beauty than summer no less gripping

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Date: 8/28/2024 9:55:00 AM
Very nicely crafted
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Denis Bruce
Date: 8/28/2024 11:36:00 AM
Thank you ,Joseph, for taking the time to read my effort
Date: 8/28/2024 9:24:00 AM
Fun, unique, and creative description of autumn! Enjoyable read! Thanks for sharing M
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Denis Bruce
Date: 8/28/2024 11:37:00 AM
I am so delighted ,Robert, that you found the poem entertaining

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