Autumnal impressions

After flaunting her  wares and dazzling our eyes
Her energy ebbing ,motivation low
It should come to us as no surprise
That her  colours fade to no linger glow

 She does now sedately and sombrely dress
 Though it still being in her nature to tease 
With the whispering wind she conspires to impress
Her onlookers as she strips to please

This seasonally haunting  dance of the seven veils
With her fluttering leaves of russet ,brown  and gold
Amid the showers of which us she richly hails
Shows  that she does not fear being so  bold

Autumn even with her loss of  lively  chirping
Displays a beauty than summer no less gripping
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May Avatar
August 28, 2024 at 9:55 AM
Very nicely crafted
Bruce Avatar
August 28, 2024 at 11:36 AM
Thank you ,Joseph, for taking the time to read my effort
Sidwell Avatar
August 28, 2024 at 9:24 AM
Fun, unique, and creative description of autumn! Enjoyable read! Thanks for sharing M
Bruce Avatar
August 28, 2024 at 11:37 AM
I am so delighted ,Robert, that you found the poem entertaining
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