Autumnal

Summer; the season of the sun, 
Spring; the season of new life 
Winter; the season of struggle, 
Autumn; the season of no strife 

Step outside, take a glimpse of beauty, 
The fresh breeze flowing slow,
City is fast asleep, not even a peep, 
No blooming flowers, yet no sheets of snow,

Piles of leaves fall, 
In the sunrise shades, 
Flowing crisp morning air, 
Mouse scampers away, afraid,

The scent of pumpkin spice, 
A strong smack straight in the face, 
The sweet smell of a crackling fire, 
Not a single thing I’d replace,

Harvesting everything we have grown, 
Telling all the scary stories, 
Spooked around the campfire, 
Experiencing Halloween,

Amber leaves sprinkling down, 
As the radiant sun falls, 
Kids running around the bonfire, 
Just some gorgeous memories I recall,

Black silhouettes against a firey sunset, 
Ending another day of fresh pies, 
Kids in Halloween costumes clamour at the door, 
The memories of the seasons lie.

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Date: 10/14/2023 8:52:00 AM
This is a great poem full of lovely imagery,’ In sunset shades’ ‘ Amber leaves sprinkling down’ ‘black silhouettes against a fiery sunset’. Very poetic. Really enjoyed it. Thank you for sharing. :):)
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Date: 10/14/2023 10:40:00 PM
Hi Christina, thank you for commenting, hopefully we get a win in the contest!! >Shared poems<
Date: 9/29/2023 12:24:00 AM
A good poem. Well written.
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Date: 9/29/2023 12:27:00 AM
Hi Jeanette, thank you for the comment, my friend and I really enjoyed writing this, and we have entered it in a contest, so we hope to get a place in that to! >Shared Poems<
Date: 9/28/2023 11:55:00 PM
exactly how i feel about autumn, such a careless month still full of love. you've put all of our thoughts into this poem, well done!
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Date: 9/28/2023 11:57:00 PM
Thanks, Writing Muse, hopefully get a place in the contest! >Shared Poems<
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