Autumn Wish

Let not your love fall
Like a gold leaf of autumn
Frolicking then bye
As drifted by the water
In the river of no end
Copyright © | Year Posted 2008

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Bellefleur Avatar
November 20, 2008 at 8:09 AM
Lovely Teresita - I can see the golden leaf wafting in the air - great comparison. Thank you for your comment on my poem..
White Avatar
September 23, 2008 at 4:30 PM
I like this write and the picture that is paints, vivid imagery, and thanks for your comments, take care D-nyce
Winter Avatar
September 22, 2008 at 10:19 AM
Absolutely beautiful. Love, Shar
Lakhera Avatar
September 22, 2008 at 4:21 AM
wow that was a very deep one. It can be related to lots of things. Love Chitra
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