Autumn Wedding Dream

The wedding they’d dreamed of was carefully chosen For brisk mid-autumn before the ground was frozen As her freedom fighter struggled in the Mideast She was absorbed in planning a fall wedding feast A lively country band in the red barn would play Magenta chrysanthemums would be her bouquet Though many of his comrades never made it home He returned to be wed ‘neath fall’s colorful dome *Entry for Rick’s “Autumn Dream” contest
Copyright © | Year Posted 2011

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Gorelick Avatar
November 8, 2011 at 7:35 AM
Sweet piece...congrats my LNC. BG
Brown Avatar
November 8, 2011 at 5:26 AM
Congratulations on your win in ^Rick's "8 Line Verse" contest Carolyn. Love, Carol
Foster Avatar
November 8, 2011 at 2:08 AM
Congratulations Carolyn. I was happy to see all went well for this couple...well written...Margaret
Arowolo Avatar
November 8, 2011 at 1:55 AM
Nice couplets,Carolyn.Congratulations on your win....Love O.A
Dietrich Avatar
November 7, 2011 at 9:36 PM
Oh, my, it had a happy ending I see. Great job, Carolyn. Congratulations.
Dufresne Avatar
November 7, 2011 at 5:33 PM
lovely and emotional scenario in this Autumm dream, Carolyn with a happy ending. Was wary that it may not be... Too much of that lately ...Bob
Quigley Avatar
November 7, 2011 at 2:42 PM
Congratulations to you and the bride and groom. Enjoyed this write Carolyn
Puddifoot Avatar
November 7, 2011 at 2:35 PM
another impressive winning poem carolyn, sounds like a dream wedding, love magenta chrysanthemums...
Onclaud Avatar
November 7, 2011 at 1:22 PM
a stirring piece that delights, carols... cheers to you for a greeeat win.. haven;t personally been sending notes to winners of past contests.. awwwh, i have daily ashtma due to weather changes here ( my first time since i was 9).. hope you're fine ... take it easy! :) hugs!
Horne Avatar
October 24, 2011 at 1:02 PM
I love this sweet write - I was expecting him to be killed in action
Johnson Avatar
October 21, 2011 at 6:28 PM
WOW!!!!!!! Very well expressed in very few words. i was given a vivid picture in my mind.Well written.
Jones Avatar
October 21, 2011 at 6:12 PM
and how did he like it? welcome back, Carolyn, is really good to see ya again. Namaste~N
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