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Autumn Walk

As I walk through the woods On this cool autumn day A bright carpet of leaves Greet my way Painted by nature In coloures so gay They flutter and glow In the breeze today As it brushes my soul On it's gentle way The fish in the pond Jump and play As ripples glow brightly In synchronised desplay And ducks sing their songs Of contintment today

Copyright © | Year Posted 2012




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Date: 12/14/2012 1:45:00 PM
Dear Elizabeth, Do YOU hum the ducks song of contentment with them but YOU probably Know the Words Superb PEN LOVE YOU ALWAYS and FOREVER YOUR Eternal Liege...Harry
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Elizabeth O'Driscoll
Date: 12/15/2012 5:03:00 AM
I don't know all the words, but i quack along with them :) xox
Date: 11/21/2012 8:22:00 PM
Elizabeth,, Stopping by to greet you and every other soup poet, with a special thank you comment, during this wonderful Thanksgiving season. Hope you do not mind the time I am taking to express my sincere appreciation for any support you have offered during the years, or time you have been here on the soup. I am deeply thankful and extend to you my best wishes for a happy and healthy Poetic Magical Thanksgiving Day. *Always & Forever, the Poet Destroyer; -*
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Elizabeth O'Driscoll
Date: 11/22/2012 3:05:00 AM
Thank you pd, happy thanksgiving to you also, love Elizabeth
Date: 11/11/2012 7:30:00 AM
dear Elizabeth.thank you for your comment.i find strength in writing as i am in a distant relationship.your work is also amazing.the way you put words across.keep up the good work.i am a fan.love Odeline
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Elizabeth O'Driscoll
Date: 11/11/2012 7:34:00 AM
thank you odeline, glad you enjoyed it, and I wish you the very best in your relationship, have a beautiful day, love elizabeth
Date: 11/11/2012 6:59:00 AM
wow nice rythmic flow. u have exciting poems
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Elizabeth O'Driscoll
Date: 11/11/2012 7:30:00 AM
Thank you Sarah, glad you enjoyed, have a beautiful day, love elizabeth
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Elizabeth O'Driscoll
Date: 11/11/2012 7:29:00 AM
Thank you Jennifer, glad you enjoyed it, have a beautiful day, love elizabeth
Date: 11/11/2012 6:23:00 AM
Enjoyed reading your work..It has great flow, rhyme ,and rhythm to it..I am glad that I chose this one to read..Sara
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Elizabeth O'Driscoll
Date: 11/11/2012 7:37:00 AM
Thank you Sarah, glad you enjoyed, have a beautiful day, love elizabeth
Date: 11/9/2012 3:36:00 AM
This is a beautiful poem. I can breathe the fresh air and sense the enchantment of this moment. Wonderfully creative.. Jake
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Elizabeth O'Driscoll
Date: 11/9/2012 5:21:00 AM
Thank you John, love elizabeth