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Autumn Vistas

In a bird filled sky, The vibrant sun slowly sets: Analogous shades.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009

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Date: 7/11/2009 10:17:00 PM
Man you are good at the Haiku... Full of so much written in so little... Good job friend...JP
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Date: 6/27/2009 10:21:00 AM
nice job...excellent writing.keep up the good work. love elizabeth
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Date: 6/26/2009 3:19:00 AM
very creative, Raul, jmg
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Date: 6/22/2009 7:05:00 AM
Another awesome haiku from the the last line..good work.
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Date: 6/21/2009 3:59:00 PM
Like your work. Sara
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Date: 6/21/2009 3:09:00 PM
love your wisdom in few words--the SUN slowly sets in a BIRD filled sky---analizing shades-analizing Autumn Vistas---interseting write to analize---brilliant--charma
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