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Autumn Vistas

In a bird filled sky, The vibrant sun slowly sets: Analogous shades.

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Jared Pickett

Date: 7/11/2009 10:17:00 PM

Man you are good at the Haiku... Full of so much written in so little... Good job friend...JP

Elizabeth Neal

Date: 6/27/2009 10:21:00 AM

nice job...excellent writing.keep up the good work. love elizabeth

James Marshall Goff

Date: 6/26/2009 3:19:00 AM

very creative, Raul, jmg

Christopher Higgins

Date: 6/22/2009 7:05:00 AM

Another awesome haiku from the maestro....love the last line..good work.

Sara Kendrick

Date: 6/21/2009 3:59:00 PM

Like your work. Sara

Charmaine Chircop

Date: 6/21/2009 3:09:00 PM

love your wisdom in few words--the SUN slowly sets in a BIRD filled sky---analizing shades-analizing Autumn Vistas---interseting write to analize---brilliant--charma