Autumn Vistas

In a bird filled sky,
The vibrant sun slowly sets:
Analogous shades.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2009

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Pickett Avatar
July 11, 2009 at 10:17 PM
Man you are good at the Haiku... Full of so much written in so little... Good job friend...JP
Neal Avatar
June 27, 2009 at 10:21 AM
nice job...excellent writing.keep up the good work. love elizabeth
Goff Avatar
June 26, 2009 at 3:19 AM
very creative, Raul, jmg
Higgins Avatar
June 22, 2009 at 7:05 AM
Another awesome haiku from the maestro....love the last line..good work.
Kendrick Avatar
June 21, 2009 at 3:59 PM
Like your work. Sara
Chircop Avatar
June 21, 2009 at 3:09 PM
love your wisdom in few words--the SUN slowly sets in a BIRD filled sky---analizing shades-analizing Autumn Vistas---interseting write to analize---brilliant--charma
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