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Autumn' tropical sand cups nut

coconuts' concuss light-craze boggles ~ sight failing tourists blearing up dented sand cups nut hammer screwdriver to milk machete dispatch caribe-dude's swingin's no match now - To The Gators!

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Andrea Dietrich

Date: 10/18/2024 7:33:00 PM

Love the machete dispatch line!

Robert Warlov
Date: 10/19/2024 3:19:00 AM

These are so hard to write. I got good verbs but it still seems inverted. I wonder how many Americans have ever even seen a machete? Tourists beware!

Ink Empress

Date: 10/16/2024 1:10:00 AM

Your play with words is so impressive and creative! Especially “ coconuts' concuss” brilliant word pairing! “ caribe-dude's swingin's no match now - To The Gators!” It has a fun touch to it and i can see through your words, tourists, in a tropical setting! Brilliant! Pleasure reading you dear Robert

Robert Warlov
Date: 10/16/2024 10:35:00 AM

Thanks