Autumn' tropical sand cups nut


 
coconuts' concuss light-craze boggles ~ sight failing tourists blearing up dented sand cups nut hammer screwdriver to milk machete dispatch caribe-dude's swingin's no match now - To The Gators! .
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Dietrich Avatar
October 18, 2024 at 7:33 PM
Love the machete dispatch line!
Warlov Avatar
October 19, 2024 at 3:19 AM
These are so hard to write. I got good verbs but it still seems inverted. I wonder how many Americans have ever even seen a machete? Tourists beware!
Empress Avatar
October 16, 2024 at 1:10 AM
Your play with words is so impressive and creative! Especially “ coconuts' concuss” brilliant word pairing! “ caribe-dude's swingin's no match now - To The Gators!” It has a fun touch to it and i can see through your words, tourists, in a tropical setting! Brilliant! Pleasure reading you dear Robert
Warlov Avatar
October 16, 2024 at 10:35 AM
Thanks
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