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September 24, 2024

Autumn Haiku - Set Of Three Poetry Contest

Sponsor: Tania Kitchin

SECOND PLACE

steps in veiled autumn rose bushes sad crave for warmth sprawled leaves create art nature's spree over glimmering streaks of light spread on glorious fields pumpkin patch dazzles birds end yearly rendezvous time to fly back south

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Sara Kendrick

Date: 10/22/2024 6:41:00 AM

I am delighted to see your Haiku on the winners' list. Nicely descriptive winning lines penned. Way to go. Congratulations. Sara K

Malabika Ray Choudhury
Date: 10/22/2024 7:11:00 AM

Thank you, Sara, for your kind, appreciative comment. Delighted to see you here…your comments are precious!

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 10/9/2024 10:56:00 PM

Lovely fall images, Mala. Congrats

Malabika Ray Choudhury
Date: 10/11/2024 5:50:00 PM

Dear Andrea, Thank you so much for commenting. Looking forward to read yours. A bit caught up with the memoir-writing project. Love ~

Tania Kitchin

Date: 10/8/2024 1:08:00 PM

Mala, congratulations on your winning placement with your lovely haiku set.

Malabika Ray Choudhury
Date: 10/8/2024 6:27:00 PM

Thank you, Tania. I feel so honoured!

Michael Tor

Date: 10/7/2024 6:04:00 PM

Such a lovely Haiku. Really enjoy reading. Really puts you in the mood for Autumn. Well done young Lady... Thank you for sharing...

Michael Tor
Date: 10/8/2024 7:37:00 PM

I took a little vacation working on our house. Thank you for asking. Missed all my fellow writers including you. Hugs.

Malabika Ray Choudhury
Date: 10/8/2024 6:29:00 PM

Dear Michael, So glad to see your comment - you are back!!! Where did you disappear? We missed you, Young Man! Thank you so much for commenting on my Haiku.

Daniel Henry Rodgers

Date: 9/25/2024 10:53:00 AM

Dear Malabika, I love Autumn, I love Haikus, I love well inked Haikus and yours meets all the standards for Haikus I love. - Blessings, My Dear Friend, Daniel

Malabika Ray Choudhury
Date: 9/25/2024 11:00:00 AM

Dear Daniel, I feel so honoured to read your comment. I love Autumn and I love Haiku, but I am still learning. Your comment inspires me!

Paula Goldsmith

Date: 9/25/2024 10:43:00 AM

I enjoyed reading your three Autumn Haiku writes. I love fall. "Good Luck" Have a blessed/wonderful day writing away.............

Malabika Ray Choudhury
Date: 9/25/2024 11:00:00 AM

Thank you, Dear Paula. Fall is really charming, I love too!