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September 24, 2024

Autumn Haiku - Set Of Three Poetry Contest

Sponsor: Tania Kitchin

SECOND  PLACE

autumn tiptoes

steps in veiled autumn
rose bushes sad crave for warmth
sprawled leaves create art

nature's spree over
glimmering streaks of light spread
on glorious fields

pumpkin patch dazzles
birds end yearly rendezvous 
time to fly back south

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Sara Kendrick Date: 10/22/2024 6:41:00 AM I am delighted to see your Haiku on the winners' list. Nicely descriptive winning lines penned. Way to go. Congratulations. Sara K Login to Reply Malabika Ray Choudhury Date: 10/22/2024 7:11:00 AM Thank you, Sara, for your kind, appreciative comment. Delighted to see you here…your comments are precious!

Andrea Dietrich Date: 10/9/2024 10:56:00 PM Lovely fall images, Mala. Congrats Login to Reply Malabika Ray Choudhury Date: 10/11/2024 5:50:00 PM Dear Andrea, Thank you so much for commenting. Looking forward to read yours. A bit caught up with the memoir-writing project. Love ~

Tania Kitchin Date: 10/8/2024 1:08:00 PM Mala, congratulations on your winning placement with your lovely haiku set. Login to Reply Malabika Ray Choudhury Date: 10/8/2024 6:27:00 PM Thank you, Tania. I feel so honoured!

Michael Tor Date: 10/7/2024 6:04:00 PM Such a lovely Haiku. Really enjoy reading. Really puts you in the mood for Autumn. Well done young Lady... Thank you for sharing... Login to Reply Michael Tor Date: 10/8/2024 7:37:00 PM I took a little vacation working on our house. Thank you for asking. Missed all my fellow writers including you. Hugs. Malabika Ray Choudhury Date: 10/8/2024 6:29:00 PM Dear Michael, So glad to see your comment - you are back!!! Where did you disappear? We missed you, Young Man! Thank you so much for commenting on my Haiku.

Daniel Henry Rodgers Date: 9/25/2024 10:53:00 AM Dear Malabika, I love Autumn, I love Haikus, I love well inked Haikus and yours meets all the standards for Haikus I love. - Blessings, My Dear Friend, Daniel Login to Reply Malabika Ray Choudhury Date: 9/25/2024 11:00:00 AM Dear Daniel, I feel so honoured to read your comment. I love Autumn and I love Haiku, but I am still learning. Your comment inspires me!

Paula Goldsmith Date: 9/25/2024 10:43:00 AM I enjoyed reading your three Autumn Haiku writes. I love fall. "Good Luck"  Have a blessed/wonderful day writing away............. Login to Reply Malabika Ray Choudhury Date: 9/25/2024 11:00:00 AM Thank you, Dear Paula. Fall is really charming, I love too!