Autumn Sun Was Kind

Autumn sun was annoyed with the sunflowers today
She pretended she liked them, which was weirdly okay.
The gourds knew better, they could read the sun’s mind.
But the sun kept her opinions secret, being ever so kind.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2022

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Vangaveti Avatar
March 14, 2022 at 2:33 AM
Cute!!
Krutsinger Avatar
March 14, 2022 at 10:02 AM
Thank you
Hawkins Avatar
March 13, 2022 at 9:31 PM
Nice one, Caren.
Krutsinger Avatar
March 14, 2022 at 10:02 AM
I appreciate it
Hankins Avatar
March 13, 2022 at 10:50 AM
Aw, I like this, too.
Hankins Avatar
March 14, 2022 at 12:09 PM
I do. If I didn't, I wouldn't read past the first line, Caren.
Krutsinger Avatar
March 14, 2022 at 10:02 AM
You like them all
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