Balveen Cheema Poet Cinquain

Autumn Stroll Cinquain

Golden Outbursts


Honeyed
Pathways shimmer
Matted Maple forests'
Flaking golden outbursts entice
Strolling


FIRST
October22, 2015
Contest: Autumn Stroll Cinquain Form
Sponsor: Eve Roper

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Skat A October 29, 2015 at 9:02 PM Nice win Balveen Cheema October 30, 2015 at 4:05 AM Thanks Skat!

Kim Merryman October 28, 2015 at 9:06 PM Lovely imagery, Balveen! Congrats on your 1st place win! Love, Kim Balveen Cheema October 29, 2015 at 5:30 AM Thanks for visiting my page and for appreciating the imagery!

Paul Callus October 27, 2015 at 2:35 PM Wow! This is strikingly beautiful, Balveen! Worthy of golden outbursts! ~ Congratulations on this deserved top placing! ~ Sweet regards // paul Balveen Cheema October 27, 2015 at 2:46 PM Thanks Paul for your kind compliments! Regards, Balvee

James Inman October 26, 2015 at 9:12 PM Lovely Balveen. Balveen Cheema October 26, 2015 at 9:19 PM James, many, many thanks!

CayCay Godwin October 26, 2015 at 9:05 PM Congratulations! CayCay Balveen Cheema October 26, 2015 at 9:06 PM Thanks Caycay!

Jan Allison October 26, 2015 at 6:49 PM so beautiful Balveen many congrats:-) hugs Jan xx Balveen Cheema October 26, 2015 at 9:09 PM Sorry Jan! I posted that by mistake to you. Love Balveen Cheema October 26, 2015 at 9:06 PM Eve, thanks for the first placement for my first effort at writing a cinquain! Love, Balveen Balveen Cheema October 26, 2015 at 9:03 PM Thanks Jan! Love, Balveen

Eve Roper October 26, 2015 at 6:47 PM Congratulations on your win! Thank you so very much for participating in my contest. Balveen Cheema October 26, 2015 at 9:10 PM Eve, thanks for the first placement for my first effort at writing a cinquain! Love, Balveen

Sandra Haight October 26, 2015 at 6:39 PM Wonderfully done, Balveen, especially using the word counts too. Nice imagery, and congrats on your 1st Place win! Hugs, Sandra Balveen Cheema October 26, 2015 at 9:04 PM Sandra dear, thanks for all the appreciation! Love, Balveen

Andrea Dietrich October 23, 2015 at 8:15 PM wow, you did it not only by syllable count by by word count too. I did mine that way. HOpe we can get brownie points for that!! Mine is not posted yet. I really like yours. Balveen Cheema October 23, 2015 at 10:04 PM Andrea, thanks for your good wishes!

Laura Leiser October 22, 2015 at 1:24 AM Great images in your poem, Balveen! Enjoyed:) Balveen Cheema October 22, 2015 at 1:33 AM Wow! That's a real instant response from the other end of the world! Thank you so much Laura! Love, Balveen