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              POPSUGAR | Autumn cozy, Scenery, Autumn aesthetic

Autumn Sparkles

This cycle drifts like a glossed leaf Bathed in mauve- red across the lane; October ‘s cloak swathes ‘round my wish Unfurling before winter ‘s grief – Explosions of bold colors tease Their every movement, every chime Whorl along…from hillocks to ponds Blazing sparks on timber of trees. How Fall embers within me gleam, As I enfold its mint perfume Huffing blowing as north winds ‘ roam , Through a season’s dance quite supreme: Autumn, let not your glory pass For harvest moon beguiles me still-- And orchids , thyme parade their charm While ease lulls me on sheets of grass. Brian Strand's Completely Your Choice (8) Contest 9/13/2020
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Castellenas Avatar
October 18, 2020 at 2:15 PM
A wonderful poem for the days of Fall. Thank you Nette for sharing the amazing poem. I love the days of Fall. Halloween for the children and the change of color.
Kauffman Avatar
September 15, 2020 at 9:37 AM
Charming and elegant, Nette. I really like your rhyme scheme - subtle as a leaf changing color. Congratulations! Now that I have finally let go of summer, I am all about autumn!
Mcgee Avatar
September 15, 2020 at 7:15 AM
congrats on your win...Autumn is beguiling for sure.
Zahid Avatar
September 14, 2020 at 7:59 AM
Congratulations on your win
Ranaweera  Avatar
September 14, 2020 at 5:58 AM
Agreed, Victor. This piece is so beautiful. I see; I hear; I feel. Congratulations, Nette, on your top win!!
Ball Avatar
September 14, 2020 at 5:52 AM
This is absolutely perfect in every way in my book. Love the description. Great job. God Bless, JB
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