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Autumn Skies

Autumn skies beckon As ochre intermingles With battleship greys Silhouetted shapes Against the impending bleak Declare summers end http://www.thehighlanderspoems.com/nature-8.php

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Date: 6/2/2010 12:10:00 PM
The imagery is impressive. I transitioned right into fall. Well done.
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Date: 5/28/2010 9:29:00 PM
Lovely Haiku James... Summer is the time of year giving great inspiration for writes... I just posted one while on my vacation.. ..happy weekend.. with luv from the "Sweetheart"
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Date: 5/28/2010 1:28:00 PM
Love your Autumn double haiku. Great colours aren't they? 'Watercolour painted skies of ochre tinged with grey' is the first line of an autumn poem I wrote a while back. I think it's my favourite season to write about. Thanks for posting your taste of Autumn :)
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Date: 5/28/2010 1:19:00 PM
Excellent double haiku painting clear images of my favorite season. Summer's departure is always welcome here. Love, Carolyn
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