Autumn Skies

A dark blue sky
watching over
golden covered
      trees.

As a cool fall
breeze whips through
branches, sending
colorful leafs to
      the ground.

Not a cloud can
be seen on this
carefree day,
   so refreshing,
resting here so relaxed
     and contented.

Autumn skies
so blue and clear
not like any other.

Taking pictures with
my mind to store
and remember this
enchanting day.

wrote 10-17-08
Copyright © | Year Posted 2008


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Date: 10/19/2008 2:23:00 PM
This is such a very enchanting picture of autumn. I really like days as described here. The imagery is poignant and intoxicating. This is my favorite time of the year. Great job! ~Joseph
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Date: 10/17/2008 4:08:00 PM
Sounds like an absolutely gorgeous day! Well captured dear friend. Sorry, have been busy of late with visiting relatives and somewhat behind on the soup. Please do not try to comment on any more of my old poems! It is so appreciated, but not necessary! All the best. Love, Shar
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Date: 10/17/2008 3:59:00 PM
what an enchanting write, love the picture that this forms in my mind, it gives one a sense of peace, and a feeling that everything will be alright, take care D-nyce
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Date: 10/17/2008 2:35:00 PM
James you put me there with your choice of words. Excellent write. God has created so many wonders for us to enjoy. You know James God is the final judge who gets into heaven your son is precious to Jesus we dont know that until we get there. Blessings Michael
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