David Mohn Poet Cinquain

Autumn Serenade

Immersed
                    In autumn’s song
                I stroll among the notes
          That fall in amber symphonies-
                           Of oak

Autumn Stroll Cinquain Form - Poetry Contest
                       24 Oct 2015
                         3rd Place

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Charlotte Puddifoot November 1, 2015 at 4:59 PM this is a really lovely, unique one, i personally think it deserved a higher placement, every line 'pitch perfect' - congrats on your win!

Skat A October 29, 2015 at 9:09 PM David, Congratulations on your "Autumn Stroll win." Love SKAT

Kim Merryman October 29, 2015 at 1:20 PM This is great, David! One of the more unique entries! Congrats on your win! Love, Kim

Andrea Dietrich October 28, 2015 at 7:02 PM wow, one of the best I have seen in this contest. I Love how your motto seems to be "less is better!"

James Inman October 27, 2015 at 10:18 AM Lovely poem David. The song of nature.