Autumn Reverie

lean fields topped up shedding trees in fullness~~glean pluck play togetherness

appreciationbeautifulfamilyhappinessinspirationmonoku

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Paula Goldsmith

November 8, 2023 at 9:27 AM

Back with Congratulations on your win. I enjoyed reading your "Autumn Reverie" write again. Enjoy your day/win writing away........

William Kelii Kekaula

November 8, 2023 at 9:49 AM

Mahalo, Paula! You're a considerate soul and a blessing to fellow soupers! Aloha, William

Regina Elliott

November 2, 2023 at 10:13 AM

Wondrous autumnal monoku, William. Whether for a contest or not, it's a winner to me. Have a tranquil evening. ~

William Kelii Kekaula

November 2, 2023 at 11:31 AM

Awe--some, Gina! Have a blessed day and Aloha, William

Ink Empress

October 29, 2023 at 4:16 PM

Beautiful monoku, so well written and delivered. I love your autumn reverie and the imagery you’ve painted in few syllables in just one line with excellent diction truly stands out for me! Shedding trees in fullness, deep and so creatively woven. Glean pluck play… ah what an ambience! Goodluck for the contest, if this is for the contest. Sending you light always.

Ink Empress

October 29, 2023 at 4:54 PM

Oh about not including any dates details besides just the poem in text field? Yes thats a rule in soup contests i think. If you are a premium member you can always add details to note section. Aloha

William Kelii Kekaula

October 29, 2023 at 4:34 PM

Thanks a whole lot, Ink Empress, for your sized-up analysis that continues its uplifting effects! I'm still at a loss, regarding the new aspects of what may be posted or not, as sponsors state differently precludes an inference of posting of any kind, i.e., beyond that of the poem text field, baffling? Aloha always, William