Autumn Reverie

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Poetic Form: Monoku

Inspired: 2023 October 29

*3rd Place*

autumn reverie

Contest Judged: 2023 November 07

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Paula Goldsmith

Date: 11/8/2023 9:27:00 AM

Back with Congratulations on your win. I enjoyed reading your "Autumn Reverie" write again. Enjoy your day/win writing away........

Hilo Poet
Date: 11/8/2023 9:49:00 AM

Mahalo, Paula! You're a considerate soul and a blessing to fellow soupers! Aloha, William

Regina Elliott

Date: 11/2/2023 10:13:00 AM

Wondrous autumnal monoku, William. Whether for a contest or not, it's a winner to me. Have a tranquil evening. ~

Hilo Poet
Date: 11/2/2023 11:31:00 AM

Awe--some, Gina! Have a blessed day and Aloha, William

Ink Empress

Date: 10/29/2023 4:16:00 PM

Beautiful monoku, so well written and delivered. I love your autumn reverie and the imagery you’ve painted in few syllables in just one line with excellent diction truly stands out for me! Shedding trees in fullness, deep and so creatively woven. Glean pluck play… ah what an ambience! Goodluck for the contest, if this is for the contest. Sending you light always.

Ink Empress
Date: 10/29/2023 4:54:00 PM

Oh about not including any dates details besides just the poem in text field? Yes thats a rule in soup contests i think. If you are a premium member you can always add details to note section. Aloha

Hilo Poet
Date: 10/29/2023 4:34:00 PM

Thanks a whole lot, Ink Empress, for your sized-up analysis that continues its uplifting effects! I'm still at a loss, regarding the new aspects of what may be posted or not, as sponsors state differently precludes an inference of posting of any kind, i.e., beyond that of the poem text field, baffling? Aloha always, William

Paula Goldsmith

Date: 10/29/2023 12:58:00 PM

I enjoyed reading this one. Have a wonderful day.................

Hilo Poet
Date: 10/29/2023 1:01:00 PM

Blessings, Paula, and a wonderful Sunday to you too! Aloha, William