Autumn Reverie

the chill and the blow of wind gets stronger~ colorful leaves swirl around
they are unsure of their destination ~ my love lost in confusion
Copyright © | Year Posted 2023

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Goldsmith Avatar
November 8, 2023 at 9:28 AM
Congratulations on your win. A wonderful Monoku write. I enjoyed reading this one. Enjoy your day/win writing away........
Dietrich Avatar
October 26, 2023 at 3:14 PM
I really like this. But I need to take another look at the rules of this contest. It says to use monoku, which is only one line. But others are doing tanks!
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