Autumn Reverie

Autumn arrives with colors on a scenic pallet
Hanging like jewels sparkling in the sun that is met

Leaves falling, floating, twirling in the air, to the ground
Piled in layers like blankets, woven to be found

The mixture of cool and warmth from autumn settles on
The land we walk and live, where sweet dreams are made upon

Seasons change, but celebration is there to ensue
After colors fall in their flight, under skies of blue

Paint your mind like landscape, with positive thoughts to be
Take the colors with you as an autumn reverie

Heidi Sands

9/29/18

Placed 2nd in the premiere Vermillion autumn couplets contest.
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Rodrigues Avatar
November 14, 2018 at 12:54 PM
Such a beautiful Autumn Reverie! Congratulations, Heidi!
Sands Avatar
November 14, 2018 at 1:06 PM
Thank you very much Kim :)
Marcum Wong Avatar
November 13, 2018 at 9:18 PM
A very lovely autumn poem Heidi! Congratulations on your Second Placement! : )
Sands Avatar
November 14, 2018 at 7:12 AM
Thank you Connie :)
Allison Avatar
November 13, 2018 at 3:09 AM
Absolutely beautiful imagery Heidi, many congrats:-) hugs Jan xx
Sands Avatar
November 13, 2018 at 8:16 AM
Thank you Jan! :) Have a nice day.
Roper Avatar
November 12, 2018 at 11:08 PM
Awesome poem, Heidi, congratulations on your win.
Sands Avatar
November 12, 2018 at 11:40 PM
Thank you very much Eve :)
May Avatar
November 12, 2018 at 4:56 PM
Beautiful write Heidi..Congrats on your win..
Sands Avatar
November 12, 2018 at 11:40 PM
Thank you Joseph. I appreciate it :)
Pandit Avatar
November 12, 2018 at 4:10 PM
Congrats Heidi on your podium win..well done, friend.
Sands Avatar
November 12, 2018 at 4:39 PM
Thank you Vijay for all your kindness and support! :)
Scythe Avatar
November 12, 2018 at 2:13 PM
Well done on your 2nd place win! -VS
Sands Avatar
November 12, 2018 at 4:37 PM
Thank you so much Vermillion. I appreciate this opportunity and placement! :)
Theraven Avatar
October 23, 2018 at 10:40 PM
Beautiful prose, truly. I'm still working through your collection of poems, like a pile of wrapped presents. Thank you.
Sands Avatar
October 23, 2018 at 10:47 PM
Thank you for your time and interest. I appreciate your kind comment :)
Gentile Avatar
September 30, 2018 at 8:22 AM
Though I will miss summer, your reverent write reminds me so clearly of the beauty of Fall. Excellent as usual Heidi xxoo Happy Sunday!
Sands Avatar
September 30, 2018 at 8:38 AM
I will miss summer too Mike. Thank you for your visit and comment on this :) Happy Sunday !
Pandit Avatar
September 30, 2018 at 7:10 AM
A beautiful welcome to autumn you wrote, Heidi. A scenic walk through imagery.
Sands Avatar
September 30, 2018 at 7:26 AM
Thank you Vijay. I appreciate your comment :) Have a nice day.
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