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Autumn Refuge

Cat door swings open Field mouse scampers in -- Tiny feet warmed

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Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 6/5/2012 6:12:00 AM

Congratulations on your win in P.D.'s contest Carolyn. Love, Carol

Gwendolen Song

Date: 6/4/2012 2:26:00 PM

Awwww, how adorable! Llike a Tom and Gerry cartoon! Congrats on a child-like imagination! Love, Gwendolen

Bl Devnath

Date: 6/4/2012 9:10:00 AM

Congratulation on your win. Loved always bl

David Williams

Date: 6/4/2012 2:36:00 AM

Carolyn congrats on your win..David

Elliott Bowe The Drunken Poet

Date: 6/4/2012 12:15:00 AM

Congratulations on your win...Great write!!!

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 6/3/2012 6:32:00 PM

oh, I do remember this one!!! Congrats, sweetie.

Kash Poet

Date: 5/30/2011 12:07:00 PM

Very cute......

Duncan Chappell

Date: 10/29/2010 4:15:00 AM

such a good peace here my friend thank you duncan

De R

Date: 10/10/2010 11:23:00 AM

Such a sweet write, Carolyn. Congrats on your win.:)Emilia

Francine Roberts

Date: 10/9/2010 10:55:00 PM

adorable, congrats on your win in the contest

James Fraser

Date: 10/9/2010 7:28:00 AM

Congratulations Carolyn on your win in Andrea's Animal Haiku contest with this cute little poem. Glad to see you have reached your sisters safely. Have a lovely weekend >> James,xx

Harry Horsman

Date: 10/9/2010 12:35:00 AM

Love this and the humour, Carolyn, congrats with this winner in the contest. Harry

Wilma Neels

Date: 10/8/2010 12:16:00 PM

Carolyn, congratulations on your awesome win with this great haiku. Hope you are still enjoying the trip. Love Wilma :)

Kabuteng P.Ink K.

Date: 10/8/2010 11:41:00 AM

Aww this also creates such a cute image! lucky mouse! Hopefully the cat doesn't scamper back in ;) Congrats on your win, Carolyn :) --- nikko :)

Sara Kendrick

Date: 10/8/2010 11:21:00 AM

Congratulations on your win..Sara

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 10/8/2010 9:28:00 AM

Congratulations Carolyn on your win in Andrea Dietrich's contest. Love, Carol

John Freeman

Date: 10/8/2010 7:53:00 AM

Congratulations, my Lady on your excellent presentation. Agape, Moses

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 10/8/2010 5:42:00 AM

Congratulations on this well deserved win in the contest, Carolyn

Doris Culverhouse

Date: 10/8/2010 5:27:00 AM

congrats on the win!!

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 10/8/2010 4:22:00 AM

Carolyn, this was ADORABLE. Truly one of my favorites Luv, Adnrea

Tahera Mannan

Date: 10/8/2010 3:20:00 AM

Such beautiful images. Many congratulations.

Matthew Anish

Date: 10/6/2010 7:13:00 AM

That mouse had better watch out! This is an enjoyable haiku! How are your feeling? Peace & blessings Matthew Anish

Veronica Joseph

Date: 10/3/2010 10:56:00 AM

reading this as I watch the squirrels stuff their faces and run about chasing each other....

Dane Ann Smith-Johnsen

Date: 10/2/2010 1:19:00 AM

Cute...really cute! Smiles...

Gerard Keogh Jr.

Date: 10/1/2010 10:37:00 AM

This is so charming and unique that you get the top mark. I dislike guns, beautiful blonde poetess, but I reluctantly but firmly decided to own one. I can not control the outside which is going insane, but I can attempt to protect the innocent worthwhile lives inside. Love always, Gerard.