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Autumn Refuge

Cat door swings open
 
Field mouse scampers in --
 
     Tiny feet warmed

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Carol Sunshine Brown

June 5, 2012 at 6:12 AM

Congratulations on your win in P.D.'s contest Carolyn. Love, Carol

Gwendolen Song

June 4, 2012 at 2:26 PM

Awwww, how adorable! Llike a Tom and Gerry cartoon! Congrats on a child-like imagination! Love, Gwendolen

Bl Devnath

June 4, 2012 at 9:10 AM

Congratulation on your win. Loved always bl

David Williams

June 4, 2012 at 2:36 AM

Carolyn congrats on your win..David

Elliott Bowe The Drunken Poet

June 4, 2012 at 12:15 AM

Congratulations on your win...Great write!!!

Andrea Dietrich

June 3, 2012 at 6:32 PM

oh, I do remember this one!!! Congrats, sweetie.

Kash Poet

May 30, 2011 at 12:07 PM

Very cute......

Duncan Chappell

October 29, 2010 at 4:15 AM

such a good peace here my friend thank you duncan

De R

October 10, 2010 at 11:23 AM

Such a sweet write, Carolyn. Congrats on your win.:)Emilia

Francine Roberts

October 9, 2010 at 10:55 PM

adorable, congrats on your win in the contest

James Fraser

October 9, 2010 at 7:28 AM

Congratulations Carolyn on your win in Andrea's Animal Haiku contest with this cute little poem. Glad to see you have reached your sisters safely. Have a lovely weekend >> James,xx

Harry Horsman

October 9, 2010 at 12:35 AM

Love this and the humour, Carolyn, congrats with this winner in the contest. Harry

Wilma Neels

October 8, 2010 at 12:16 PM

Carolyn, congratulations on your awesome win with this great haiku. Hope you are still enjoying the trip. Love Wilma :)

Kabuteng P.Ink K.

October 8, 2010 at 11:41 AM

Aww this also creates such a cute image! lucky mouse! Hopefully the cat doesn't scamper back in ;) Congrats on your win, Carolyn :) --- nikko :)

Sara Kendrick

October 8, 2010 at 11:21 AM

Congratulations on your win..Sara

Carol Sunshine Brown

October 8, 2010 at 9:28 AM

Congratulations Carolyn on your win in Andrea Dietrich's contest. Love, Carol

John Freeman

October 8, 2010 at 7:53 AM

Congratulations, my Lady on your excellent presentation. Agape, Moses

Dr.Ram Mehta

October 8, 2010 at 5:42 AM

Congratulations on this well deserved win in the contest, Carolyn

Doris Culverhouse

October 8, 2010 at 5:27 AM

congrats on the win!!

Andrea Dietrich

October 8, 2010 at 4:22 AM

Carolyn, this was ADORABLE. Truly one of my favorites Luv, Adnrea

Tahera Mannan

October 8, 2010 at 3:20 AM

Such beautiful images. Many congratulations.

Matthew Anish

October 6, 2010 at 7:13 AM

That mouse had better watch out! This is an enjoyable haiku! How are your feeling? Peace & blessings Matthew Anish

Veronica Joseph

October 3, 2010 at 10:56 AM

reading this as I watch the squirrels stuff their faces and run about chasing each other....

Dane Ann Smith-Johnsen

October 2, 2010 at 1:19 AM

Cute...really cute! Smiles...

Gerard Keogh Jr.

October 1, 2010 at 10:37 AM

This is so charming and unique that you get the top mark. I dislike guns, beautiful blonde poetess, but I reluctantly but firmly decided to own one. I can not control the outside which is going insane, but I can attempt to protect the innocent worthwhile lives inside. Love always, Gerard.

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