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Autumn Razors

Every Autumn you come to me Like a haunting ghost The vision is surreal But the deep scar is bleeding The deeper the cut opens The pain radiates through my breath You will forever be my unfinished business. -Heather Boardman

Copyright © | Year Posted 2014




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Date: 4/2/2016 12:40:00 AM
Heather, nice to see this one again. LINDA
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Date: 9/22/2014 3:08:00 AM
deep touching beautifully penned
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Heather Boardman
Date: 4/2/2016 12:36:00 PM
Thank you!
Date: 9/10/2014 12:32:00 AM
Beautiful poem. Heartfelt with so much talent! Welcome to the soup!!! =) -your friend edward!
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Heather Boardman
Date: 4/2/2016 12:36:00 PM
Thanks Edward!
Date: 9/8/2014 5:46:00 PM
wow, Heather, this one hits good. I mean, it's awesome. Love the unfinished business end, , A nice warm WELCOME to poetry soup. I hope you enjoy the community. You'll find many friendly poets, who are ready to support and give positive feedback. I want to be the first to invite you on over, to the contest page. I OFFER MY CONTEST, in hopes it inspires you to write another poem. I'm looking forward to following you and your poetry:) Here's the link to the contest page. http://www.poetrysoup.com/poetry_contests/ <---~Take Care!! From: your new poet friend @-> LINDA <-@
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Date: 9/8/2014 6:18:00 AM
- Warm welcome to PoetrySoup,Heather - I choose your first great autumn poem - You write skillfully - Nice to meet you! - Hope you will be satisfied with our "soup family" - we are many .. but has plenty of room for you too- Be kind and keep PoetrySoup as a haven -(Comment on the poetry of others and they will comment on yours.) Thank you posted your words and thoughts here, I want to come back to read more another day. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
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Heather Boardman
Date: 4/2/2016 12:36:00 PM
Thank you!!!

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